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Reviews for Summer Forces

By : MrsMalfoyy
  • From ANON - Evelyn on May 26, 2013
    Great concept; but more detail could have been put into this.
    I found in chapter 4 i think it was, that the whole "Having a wank" part was rather uncouth. I could have been written with much more eloquence and dignity.
    Furthermore, the chapters should be somewhat longer, and much more explanation/story building could occur.

    Personally; I advise you read through this story and take her example.

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  • From ANON - Citten on March 23, 2013
    Yeah a new chapter! i was beginning to think that you had forgotten us. :) well i am very courious to see what happens next and i am hoping that you will post the next chapter soon! :) i am so wanting to see what lucius does and where they are going!
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  • From DB1 on March 22, 2013
    @8 great story update soon!!

    DB
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  • From ANON - Sheri on March 22, 2013
    Overall the story has potential however I feel that Hermione is out of character. She would be pissed off but she wouldn't lower herself by slouching and petulance. She would show she muggle born but with taste and she would use her intelligence and shape tongue to really make Him mad.. with that take it could really open up many possibilities for the couple. Also if the ministry passed a law it would have to apply to all purebloods, including the Weasley's especially if the law passed with harry and ron only engaged. Just some thoughts.. I do like the overall concept of the story.
    sheri.
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  • From demonsangel on March 21, 2013
    Honestly, I think they need a good sit down talk. Lucius needs to stop trying to be controlling, and Hermione needs to relax a bit.
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  • From ANON - Memoryissues on March 21, 2013
    I truly love this story, not only is it my favourite harry/fenrir but also the best mpreg I have read as well , not only that but it hasn't been written by a illiterate gibbon. Please update, pretty please with sugar on top :)
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  • From ANON - Sailor Sol on February 07, 2013
    Bravo! Just finished Chapter 7, and they're a little short, but brilliant! I think you've managed to capture not only Lucius' personality, but Hermione's as well. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From Citten on January 24, 2013
    oh i love it! espeacial the last part! ;) post soon! i do hope that you have lots more for this story planned! :)
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  • From piksi on January 13, 2013
    I Love it! But could you please write a little longer? I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 02, 2013
    Hi there. Intriguing story so far. Thank you. And, I look forward to Lucius learning that Hermione Granger is not someone to be trifled with! I can't believe he spanked her!! What an ass. He is looking forward to sleeping with her, but spanks her like she's a child?! Ugh!!! Come on Hermione... hex him where it hurts! :-) Thanks again and Happy New Year! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Mark's Pet on December 30, 2012
    Oh, I so hope that Lucius is going to turn Hermoine over his knee and give her the GOOD spanking; she so richly deserves!!!!!

    I can just see Lucius punishing Hermoine and Hermoine just LOVING it.

    Please post again soon. Please, please, please!?!?!?!?!
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  • From ANON - Anne on December 06, 2012
    Update soon. :)
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  • From demonsangel on October 01, 2012
    Well, it sounds interesting so far. To bad Hermione can't be paired up with both Severus and Lucius. That would be all sorts of interesting. After all, who would be brainy enough to match up with both of them lol. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
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