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Reviews for Unintentional Inveiglement

By : onecelestialbeing
  • From Marionne25 on March 27, 2017

    omg are you still alive?! 

    hahaha. kidding. 

     

    please update soon! dying here due to my graduation recital preparation =)

    . your story keeps me well and sane. 

     

    lots of love 


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  • From mumoftrips on March 02, 2017

    Just read this story for the second time.  Are you ever going to finish it???  I love it xx


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  • From ANON - VQ_83 on January 31, 2017

    I have been bing reading this story for DAYS and now I want to cry...more updates! Amazing writing, great story line and development of characters. Can't wait to see what happens next!


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  • From ANON - Boxieboo on January 18, 2017

    I started reading this last week and I have hardly put my phone down. Most nights not actually sleeping till 3am because I've been glued to your story. I have now caught up and these last few chapters have really made me hold my husband that little bit tighter. I nearly cried when I read the bit about him saying goodbye.

    Keep doing the good work, cant wait for the next chapter

    Xx


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  • From ANON - Auddity on January 13, 2017

    I just spent the last few days bingeing on this story. I'm desperate for the conclusion! I love it. I'm new to fan fiction, but this piece blows everything else I've read out of the water. Please please please update again soon! 


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  • From ANON - on January 05, 2017

    Loved every chapter. I cant wait for the next update. We are getting so close to the most deserved happily ever after! 


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  • From ANON - Hufflefaerie on December 19, 2016

    I only found your work a couple days ago. But I have to say, I am delighted and engrossed. I've found that yours is now my go to reading whenever I need a break from my work.I love how your fan-fiction fits so neatly within the pages of the original work, and can't wait to keep reading. I dread to think how this is going to end, because I think we all know at this point how Rowling's final novel ends. But I dearly hope by some miracle that your retelling allows my favorite shipped couple to remain together beyond the end of the original. I'm not sure if this review will show up on the chapter I am on or if it will go to a general review for the story, but I am about halfway through and in great anticipation of what happens next. Thank you for such an enjoyable tale. 


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  • From ANON - Kipper on December 07, 2016

    Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm hoping for a happy ending, but I'm sure that I will enjoy wherever you go with this story. Keep up the fantastic work! 


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  • From Fox on December 04, 2016

    Ohh Celestial you'reback!!!

    I was thinking of you and hoping you were all right. I've missed you. Please don't injure yourself again  (I know you're not doing it on purpose ) I think you've used up your lifelong injury limit.

    I'm so thrilled you are back!  Can you tell?  ;) ;) ;)

    It's great to read another chapter from you! 

    I think I'll have to read it all again, not that I don't remember, but a new chapter is a perfect excuse :) if I ever needed one.

    Now.  

    Chapter 65!

    Hermione's confusion is completely understandable, I think it's written very well. And, of course the moment, when she almost seen Severus was exciting apart from the "almost" bit...

    The meeting of their minds/souls again, a very informative event, hopefully they will remember it when they wake up. 

    Nor sure if I ever mentioned in my previous ramblings, that I really like your Filch character.  He's very rarely shown in a positive light.  It's really nice to see :)

    Thank you so much. 

    Hope to hear from you soon  ;)

    Love

    Fox xx 

     


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  • From ANON - aliciana on December 01, 2016

    This is an amazing piece of work and it is a joy to see that you have updated it. Thoroughly realistic and your prose is exceptional. Definitely one of those stories when you want the chapters to go on and on. I don't know which side of the Pond you are on....I am a Scot who lives in the Lancashire (true Severus county IMO) bit in Englnd but you have captured Sev and Argus incredibly well. So...really looking forward to more and hope your health issues improve. My brother suffers from the condition you mentioned so I understand a bit of what you are going through and totally sympathise. Take care my dear. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.


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  • From ANON - on November 28, 2016

    I'm so glad you're back and okay!!! I love your writing and was disappointed that it seemed like it would be another great, unfinished story. 


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  • From Aelrindil on November 13, 2016

    So long since an update, hopw you do!


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  • From ANON - Scotland on September 19, 2016

    I have read this story 3 times now. The way in which you have captured Snape is outstanding. When reading I totally believe that this is exactly how he would be. You have a very keen eye. I hope you're feeling better. & your mum is still on the mend. My mum had 2 strokes. Thankfully she only lost a few words but it's a very scary thing. Keep up the good work. Take care xxx


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  • From ANON - seersama on August 30, 2016

    your talant goes beyond words. Sitting on the edge of my seat patently waiting to see what happesn next.


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  • From ANON - MzPearlz on August 29, 2016

    I've read your stories before (I use this penname almost everywhere so if you've seen it before , that's me!) And I love every single one of them. But this story right here. *add thunderous dramatic theme noises* I'LL DIE IF YO DON'T FINISH THIS, PLEASE CONTINUE WHEN YOUR NOT SICK AND ALL. I give you so many props for dealing with adult life and sickness and all of it and still coming back to write for us! This story has been up for years (yo, I read this for 2 weeks sporadically,  and I saw Hurricane Sandy and was like...wha? So long ish ago) and this is my first time seeing it (I latched onto your other stories I knoe cause I remember your penname and I'm gunna lurk on your facebook to send you "get well!!" Wishes) I wish that I had seen this story before but I love what you're doing and keep it up! (When you can!) Hope this paragraph makes up for 64 reviews! 

    -dying over stress of current cliffhanger-

    --MzPearlz


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