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Reviews for Perfect Bliss (REVAMPED)

By : TheGreatAng
  • From ANON - jujukitty on October 12, 2012
    enjoying reading this again, and the scene with draco and luc was hot. in regards to the last chapter, couple little things, you have harry tell snape his real name and snape automatically knows who his parents are (bellatrix and darkwing) but then follow it up by having snape say he never knew bella was preggers. the other thing, albus burnt down snape's house cause he didn't like some of the info he was given? seems a little extreme as i'm sure sev's given him bad news in the past. other than that, another great chapter and i look forward to seeing more again :D
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  • From ANON - BAFan on October 11, 2012
    I'll keep this short 'cause I don't know if my Kindle will let me review at all (haven't had much luck with that). I'm liking this but it seems to me that Harry is coming to some realizations without much in the way of logical connections. For example, Matterhorn tells him that Bellatrix was engaged to Dorian Darkwing but married Rodolphus Lestrange, after which the wizarding world began hearing about someone called Tom Riddle, and from that Harry deduces that Dorian and Voldemort are the same person? Seems like a really big jump to me.

    As I said before, I'm liking this story and intend to keep reading it. I just feel that perhaps certain elements are being rushed and not explained as well as they could be.
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  • From ANON - Sharae on October 11, 2012
    Loving this revamp... keep going...
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  • From ANON - CM on October 11, 2012
    It's been so long since I've been back here because I was so busy and now so many chapters! I hope you keep updating! the Scene with Lucius and Draco was hot!!! And I'm so happy Harry got Sev!! I hope lucius don't continue being so stubborn! Please please please update soon!
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on October 11, 2012
    awww Harry and Snape's little moment was sooooooo cute :D
    So now he knows about Lucius.... dun dun dunnnnnnn lol
    I hope Harry will get a chance to explain himself.
    Well post more sooooon please!!!!

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  • From ANON - Mckey on October 11, 2012
    Uh oh seems like lucius will be the stubborn on in the group and poor sev :(
    Great story can't wait for another update I'm obsessed!
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  • From bloodshound on October 11, 2012
    and so sev moves in. i hope he relaxes a bit. any stiffer and he'd be a statue.
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  • From demonsangel on October 11, 2012
    I love this chapter! I also hate it at the same time XD It was great, don't get me wrong, but I want to jump in and throttle dumbledore while doing my best impression of Bella laughing as he turns as blue as his robes. What a horrible old man! I wouldn't be surprised if he was a perv too. You know, if Harry is worried about the Weasley's, he could always visit the Goblins and get the key to one of his other properties and let them live there for safety while making it so dumbles can't get to him. Bet they would love to have a big house where they aren't piled on top of each other. It could even be furnished, or unfurnished so they can move all their stuff there. Also, something I noticed at the start when Harry found the book, you wrote "could" instead of "couldn't" read it. Other then that, didn't notice any mistakes. If Harry doesn't want to scare Lucius off, he could always send Sev to talk to him, as they are friends. Anyways, good job, can't wait for more!
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  • From moodysavage on October 10, 2012
    :) I liked the meeting between Harry and Severus in the potions shop.Subtle just like Snape.

    Now about Lucius... he wants to be an equal with his dominant. Somehow I just don't think that's going to work out for him lol. His pride as a Malfoy may demand that he retain his power in a relationship... but he actually has a lot of practice not being in power... the whole 'Voldemort is boss' thing so he knows what it's like to accept someone else being dominant over him.

    And Harry is just not someone who is going to compromise on things he believes and he often acts on instinct. And as the Alpha dominant male... I think his instincts are not going to let him just let someone else lead... though he might indulge his mates in what they want at times.
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  • From savannah19742001 on October 10, 2012
    I like Harry and Severus meeting with each other and how considerate Harry is with Severus, getting him all potion's supplies he could ever need. Great chapter.
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  • From Hollibell on October 10, 2012
    You have been doing some revamping! I took a peek over at HPFandom and yes indeed your story is still there, under a different penname. I started to read it, until I realized how much you changed, and decided I'd be patient and read it here. I am enjoying it so far. I can't wait to see Draco's reaction to Harry being his mate. ;)


    FYI: There are still people reviewing at the other site, some as recent as June of this year. Just thought you should know you're still loved over there. ;)
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 10, 2012
    I was knd of confused with the Draco part but got a kick out of Harry part. I can't imagine Harry with tatoo & piercings...Hahaha!
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  • From bloodshound on October 10, 2012
    heh, poor luc. He's been dom ish all his life (well apart from crawling at voldies feet) and now he's a sub. i can understand how that would take some... adjusting.
    Well, it looks like snape at least might go with it gracefully.
    i wonder if anything can be done for har's 'rents and who he can sway from the club of the overcooked bird.
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  • From ANON - Mckey on October 10, 2012
    Love the interaction between Draco and lucius yum!
    Update soon please! Love love this story!
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  • From demonsangel on October 10, 2012
    Well, as I have never read this, I didn't notice the missing bit...but either way. Great chapter XD Harry seems to be having a lot of fun with his new found well...everything lol. He should ask Sev about people he can trust or not. As a spy, Sev would know a lot. Plus, as a mate, he needs to know the truth. Looking forward to reading more!
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