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By : Bickymonster
  • From moodysavage on January 15, 2013
    lol oh wow... I'm betting that their friends will not touch their wings with a 10 foot pole! Really great story idea and you have a very relaxed and easily flowing writing style that I like. I look forward to reading more :)
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  • From PeriLover on January 15, 2013
    Ok, I love a good fluff fic, and this is turning into a good one! I'll be watching for the new chapter!
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  • From Meechypoo64 on January 15, 2013
    Well their friends took it rather well. I love how protective, even it if it a little possessive, of Draco that Harry is. I almost spit out my coffee when Draco threatened Blaise with Millicent. That would make anyone drop in line!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - Ritsu66 on January 15, 2013
    I'm actually very pleased with the way the reactions turned out. I think it's partly because you didn't just make them accept it,they asked more questions,unlike other fanfics I've read. All in all it's shaping up nicely,and I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Brandi on January 15, 2013
    This story has the chance to be really good. I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From djaddict on January 15, 2013
    I do like a good creature fic! And bonus, wings!

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  • From ANON - asiacheetah on January 15, 2013
    I like the premise and it's interesting so far. Wonder if they'll ever recall what they did during a call or do their creatures completely take over. Okay so maybe I'm fishing for some lemon scene of their first time together *wink*

    Hope you continue the story.
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  • From ANON - Ritsu66 on January 15, 2013
    I think that this story is really good,and has potential to go farther than 3 chapters. :) In my opinion,you shouldn't make the mistake that I see too often and have Harry and Draco feel completely comfortable and happy about the whole situation and sudden feelings for each other. I personally don't care for their friends being immediately understanding of it,or completely disowning them,but everyone has their own opinion on that. I'm sure that however you go with their friends,it will work for your story. As a last thought,they should also take time to understand and master the abilities that you give them,rather than mastering them right away. This is all meant to be constructive,and I hope that I can help. :) Sorry for such a long review,btw. I look forward to reading more of this story. Good luck and keep up the good work.
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  • From DopeyDDHill on January 15, 2013
    So far so good. Looking forward to more. I will look forward to seeing not only to Ron/Herm reactions but also Pansy/Blaise since they were mentioned. Seeing if they are devoted friends or fake friends.
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  • From ANON - Mako on January 15, 2013
    Ohh yay! A creature/mpreg fic that acual shows a lot of potential. It's been a whe since I've read one that has caught my attention. Keep up the good work! Please update soon!
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  • From Meechypoo64 on January 14, 2013
    Very interesting plot line. Can't wait to see what trouble the boys get up to because you just got to know that they will unknowingly cause some strange pairings by affecting others emotions!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2013
    This was a really good start. I'm excited to read more and see where this goes.
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  • From ANON - Rae on January 14, 2013
    Great start, I really like it so far. I like that harry is dominant in this and not draco, I've read too many fan fics with dominant dracos in! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - blj.14 on January 14, 2013
    I'm so excited, you have all my favorites, Drarry, creature fic, mates, wings,mpreg,babies. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Perhaps Harry's inheritance will give him more power to finish Moldie Voldie off for good.
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  • From ANON - Hollibell on January 14, 2013
    *I have an account on here under this name. I don't know why my computer won't let me be signed in to review*

    I really like this so far. I don't have any ideas as to where you could go from here, I wish I did as I would like to see this continue. It might be cool if they were to slowly remember the night before, through flashbacks or dreams or something. Then again, it sounds like it was a violent, painful night, at least for Draco, so maybe not. ;)
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