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By : Bickymonster
  • From Leania07 on June 06, 2013
    LOL to true, however I have a scientific mind and even though I simply love dragons, the concept of flying with wings too small (think Pete's Dragon) is just stretching things. I'll give the magical currents would be a boon, but that would mean the wings would be more for direction and the magical currents are what makes him fly. However, I'm not disputing your method, just simply explaining my thought process ;) This is your story of course and my opinion I expect is used as feedback and nothing more; which is fine by me. Can I take the closest stone wall and bash Lucius' head into it? If Harry is oblivious then Lucius is just single minded. Honestly, just because Severus is the ultimate Slytherin (what with convincing deception and self-preservation), does not mean that he is playing a game with Lucius. This is why I always find it difficult to believe two Slytherins would make a lasting marriage; they'd spend so much time believing the other to be playing a game and trying to 'one up' each other to work properly on the relationship. Not to mention they'd both be to 'cautious' to admit their feelings; add to that a Slytherin who's paranoid and suspicious of everything and well, can we say explosive? I'm willing to see how this works, or how you make it work ;). Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to how things go with the Ginny and Blaise plot, the statement they give, and how well everyone takes it, or doesn't.

    Leania
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 06, 2013
    I love that you are continuing to update! I honor you for your stick-to-it-tiveness. Too often a story just peters out leaving a reader wanting to scream or cry or both including track the writer down & force them to finish. I think Lucius is going to be the weak leak. He cares for Sev more than he knows but right now he is thinking like his worst self. After he's leaked some info he will realize Sev, Draco & Harry were right & Lucius cares for them all way more than he thought he did. Well, maybe, that's what I think anyway.
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  • From ANON - Diddleymaz on June 06, 2013
    Extremely enjoyable story, I've crossed over from Fanfiction just to read the unexpergated story, thanks for the great plot and writing.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on June 06, 2013
    Wonderful update! Lucius just admitted he cared for Severus, but does he love him? And would Lucius really use Severus' love for him against Snape? Blaise came up with a good idea about how to deal with the press.
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  • From ANON - Diana on June 05, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Windstorm on May 26, 2013
    Amazing so far. Loving it...
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  • From AyeItsAlannah on May 25, 2013
    fav.
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  • From TempestLore on May 24, 2013
    This is hilarious! I can't stop laughing. Totally what I needed tonight. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on May 22, 2013
    i loved the flying scene between harry and Draco. a wonderful private moment we can all smile at :) ginny though ... puts me on edge with her plan . though it makes the future pairing with braise Simi easier. lupin needs to calm down he can be protective but give the boys some room. and the idea to go public is awesome i cant wait to see what comes from this going public. p-lease update soon :)
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  • From TempestLore on May 22, 2013
    Oh this looks like a story that I want to read! Thanks for sharing it. I fully intend on reading it once I finish my little Drarry story.lol The description sounds very interesting!
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo64 on May 22, 2013
    I'm glad the boys finally took flight. It is kind of why they have wings to begin with!! I'm glad Harry is protective of Draco but works very hard not to smother him with that need to protect. Poor Lupin is so worried that something will happen to his cub and have him get hurt, he may be missing what's right in front of him. I'm glad that Pansy and Hermione are trying to get along, but Ginny is in for some real disappointment. Even if someone in Slytherin goes after the boys, it won't be someone that Draco truly trusts and in the end, Harry will never turn from Draco to Ginny. She will learn the hard way just how much in love and devoted Harry is to his soulmate and child.

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Johnny on May 22, 2013
    it it wrong to just realize that al the chapter in this story start with E? lol i got to the almost last chapter and was like oh lol
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  • From ANON - Catherine on May 21, 2013
    Really enjoying the story. I'd like to be part of the notification trial - Catherine.mitton@hotnail.com
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on May 21, 2013
    That was an interesting chapter. Especially the 2 then 3 girls getting together and the guys worrying about it. That Ginny though...still thinking about causing trouble.
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  • From ANON - Diana on May 21, 2013
    I loved the chapter...
    Update soon!
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