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By : Bickymonster
  • From Jan on January 18, 2013
    So far this story is very interesting, I can't wait to see what's going to happen between our two lovely boys, please update chapter 4 soon ^_^
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  • From djaddict on January 17, 2013
    Enjoyed the update!

    Harry being all awkward is so cute! But, so is Draco being all sweet and snuggly.
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  • From EasyReader on January 17, 2013
    Found this through Starlight Massacre's fb page. Thank you so much for adding the link. I am really enjoying this. It has a great sense of humor to it and has made me smile. Especially after the walking books entered. Harry is really going to be uncomfortable now isn't he? I can't wait to read more and think that they need to "accidentally" pair Severus with Madame Pomfrey :)
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  • From ANON - Emmett on January 17, 2013
    I'm really enjoying this story! I loved that little moment Harry and Ron had before Harry went back to Draco, it was sweet. Little things like that really let readers into the characters relationships. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on January 17, 2013
    lol had a feeling that was going to be the case and i loved the game of "who can make the group feel the most awkward", wonderfully done, can just see mione and harry blushing up a storm. keep up the good work :D
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  • From ANON - Diana on January 17, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Ritsu66 on January 17, 2013
    Getting even better. I can't wait to read the next chapter,I hope the writing bug can keep at least weekly updates though,lol. Even if not,I'll keep watching for it. :D
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  • From moodysavage on January 16, 2013
    way to go Hermione... an embarrassed Harry is cute! I definitely don't think they should sleep together yet. Since you plan this story to have a light tone then the whole focus is on their relationship and sleeping together would just kind of seem to be settling anything they have to work through because it would mean they already totally accept and are comfortable with everything. But I like the embarrassment! Is it wrong that I find it cute? nawwww....

    Anyway... I so can picture them figuring out ways to keep contact more often while they become more familiar with each other. That kind of touching when Draco isn't so tired and ready to fall asleep can make things very fun and interesting. Maybe touching feet which turns into playing footsie in potions? lol And kissing would help Draco to feel less drained too. You also mentioned that the feelings and emotions would make a difference. Harry hasn't had much practice so any kind of touching & kissing would probably have a LOT of emotion from Harry.

    Stuff like that will also help them to become more comfortable with learning how to be more physically intimate.

    I like that Harry liked watching Draco sleep and that Draco pretended to be a little reluctant about Hermione visiting. Cute slytherin planning lol.
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  • From ANON - blj.14 on January 16, 2013
    Aww,pregnant Draco is so cute! Will his cravings be food or Harry? Can't wait until the parents find out. Can they fly with their wings? I'd like to see possessive protective Harry save Draco from something. Keep writing,it's great so far.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on January 16, 2013
    Thank you for updating this so soon! It was an enjoyable read.
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  • From StarrCrystal on January 16, 2013
    This is really cute! I don't normally review fics but I feel that this one needs a review. It's really good and I'm falling in love with it can't wait for the next update :)
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  • From Tesgura on January 16, 2013
    Oh this is so cute! And now Harry and Draco apparently need to have sex so they can finish school. I certainly hope it helps Harry get over the idea of having hurt Draco during their first time.
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  • From Meechypoo64 on January 16, 2013
    Poor boys. They just are starting to get comfortable with each other and now they find out that real intimacy is the key to keeping Draco and the baby healthy. Sure does put their relationship on the fast track!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From Hollibell on January 16, 2013
    Oh, I like where this is going! Although, obviously the boys aren't quite ready to acknowledge that part of things yet. Hm...I can't help but think, even though Draco is the submissive, Harry doesn't seem the type to be all that dominant. So, maybe Draco's poor bottom could get a break once in a while? ;) Just a thought. I don't mind stories where one is exclusively top, the other exclusively bottom, but the ones where they switch it up always make more sense to me. I will continue to enjoy the fast updates as long as you are able to provide them. ;)
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on January 16, 2013
    Yes, it looks like Draco is going back to his sneaky self even against Harry with the comment that he would hold it to use with Harry later if he needed to.
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