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Reviews for Slightly more perverted "Harry Potter" Reboot

By : Artemis1990
  • From ANON - Sz on April 18, 2013
    Great chapter!
    Continue,
    Z.
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  • From ANON - Joel on April 07, 2013
    This seems like an interesting story, but your use of bold for quotes makes it very difficult to read.
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  • From pfeil on April 07, 2013
    Hufflepuff is definitely the right place. In canon, Harry wanted nothing more than to belong and be normal, not to be cunning, brave, or knowledgeable.
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  • From Aleria18 on April 07, 2013
    Great story so far. I really like that you put Harry and Hermoine in Hufflepuff. Original and agree with your reasons for doing so as well. I too have seen them in pretty much every house but. I so far only have one complaint about your story... when you put the dialog in bold it's a bit distracting. At least for me it draws my eyes as I try to read a paragraph. You honestly only need to put the "" between the lines of dialog. Again thanks for sharing your story can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Kura2 on April 05, 2013
    I like your rendition and the way your story is moving.... Keep up the good work
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  • From pfeil on April 05, 2013
    Good start. A slightly-perverted H/Hr story sounds like just what I was looking for :)
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  • From Aleria18 on April 04, 2013
    Glad you decided to continue! Great start to your story. I hope to be able to read more soon! I really love a good Harry/Hermoine story!
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  • From ANON - This guy on April 03, 2013
    good start. i happen to like a story with plot; because fanfiction dot net removed a lot of stories last june because of sex, i look for these kind of storys. lots of plot with some sex. cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - Gruffard on April 02, 2013
    Well interesting idea. Looking forward to see you make perverted HP.

    Your ideas seem a bit far fetched, but I like to see how you do it,
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  • From ANON - ThatGuy115 on April 02, 2013
    Sounds like a good idea, can't wait to see what you do with it.
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  • From archangelbloodraven on April 02, 2013
    Why did you bother to type all this information instead of just writing your first chapter?
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  • From Aleria18 on April 02, 2013
    I'm up for reading your story. Can't wait to see what you are going to write.
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