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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Potion of Inhibitions

By : Ollivander
  • From Cateagle on January 29, 2022

    I hope your muse comes back for this one.  It is a most enjoyable story so far and I'd love to see more.


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  • From SpeckyClarke on January 28, 2017

    A good story with promise of it being very entertaining in later chapters.  Please inform me of updates.


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  • From ANON - H. on October 21, 2015
    I have to admit, I have read my share of fanfics, and have never felt the need to r/r, but I did in this case.
    I am loving the story, and the fact that this is the first one that actually has ample "smut" as well as a coherent idea of where it is going regarding an actual story. Most are either mindless smut (not a bad thing, they certainly have their time/place), or purely story/exposition where the rating is for language or violence rather than sex.
    I really appreciate the work and time you are putting into this, and hope there is plenty more left up your sleeve.

    Take care, partner,
    H.
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  • From ANON - HBK96 on September 03, 2015
    A very new and interesting twist of the story. I liked what you have done so far. And as always I rooted Harry and Hermione to be together, including Ginny in the mix is also cool. You have a well thought story with the sex, emotions and character perception off the charts. You have done a good work and I hope you post the next chapter soon. Patiently impatient
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  • From ANON - DobbyDobs on December 27, 2013
    KK. Thats totally cool.

    I was just wondering, cause thats a rare pairing and all..

    But please keep up the work. ^_^
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  • From ANON - DobbyDobs on December 20, 2013
    Awesome story dude...

    Maybe you could include some Harry/Mrs. Weasley in there? That'd be hot.
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  • From ANON - Jhh on November 24, 2013
    Hi Again!
    I'm really loving this story. And this last chapter was amazing and I love that Harry ask Hermione to be his girlfriend. I love to see them and Ginny having fun together. And I woldn't mind if Luna join them.

    Again thank you and see you in next chapter.

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  • From ANON - jhh on October 13, 2013
    Hi !!!

    I just came across your story and I love it!!! I love reading stories between Harry and Hermione in which they get romantically and phisically involved!!! And latelly I love seeing Ginny getting involved with those two, so that's why I love so much this amazing story!!!

    Again, thank you for this wonderful story and I will be looking forward to see you in next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Emily on September 21, 2013
    Great story but can you mentioned harrys cock sizs. And maybe make him big like towards 9 and 10. Maybe is cud be a side effect on the spell? Anyways keep it up
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  • From loyalservant on September 16, 2013
    Good start so far, and you chose my favourite year too!
    You may introduce Luna as well, if you want, she's always welcome to spice things up!
    How about some nice bondage where the girls tease and "study" Harry's body reactions while he's bound? Would love to read that!
    Can't wait for chapter 2, keep it up! :)
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  • From ANON - Yoda on September 11, 2013
    Very nice start. I would look over it again and correct some small mistakes such as not capitalizing "Harry" very often. I'd like to read more. Obviously add some Ginny and maybe some Susan Bones. Whoever you add is all good.
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  • From ANON - Joshua on September 11, 2013
    Damn good story idea. Can't wait for chapter two. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 10, 2013
    Decent concept but you need to check for grammar and work a little on transitions with additional details or buildup being something that could improve your story.
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  • From ANON - Musings Of Apathy on September 09, 2013
    I think your story has potential. If you take more time reviewing it, you would most likely catch some of the rushed sections and errors, but overall rather good. I look forward to more. I hope you take great care crafting the sexual encounters.
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  • From pfeil on September 08, 2013
    Well, you caught my attention :)

    I don't really care for Luna, though. She usually only ever shows up as complete fanwank where she can do anything (but somehow never does...)
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