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By : dweek
  • From IvarSlytherin on January 29, 2022

    This story was so littered with grammatical errors and spelling mistakes that one could almost overlook the mockery this makes of bdsm. It's not even the unsafe or unrealistic nature of it that is so ludicrous, it's the continual overuse of cliches that cinches it. There's also the fact that calling this a "dark Harry" story when the only example of him being dark is an immoral and poorly developed "harem" of sexual servitude is ridiculous; there was less magic in this story than in the original books (and they were pretty damn mundane for novels about a magical world, hell Rowling actually admitted as much).


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  • From OmniViceUser on January 03, 2020

    Hi, great Story you have here, really believable for the Characters. I´m going directly to the sequel, just wanted to let you know that still new People find this and like the Story.

     


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  • From cutieswetee on April 06, 2019

    More updates pls

     


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  • From MotekElm on November 02, 2018

    The author wrotes well - they get feelings avracr, good characterization, and grammar.

    But overall I couldn't like this fic for two reasons:

    1) they make most of the girls outwardly say no and fight against the dominant, whole secretly loving it and wanting to hurt. That's ridiculous, even for BDSM. It just promotes the notion of "she wanted it" rape or "her mouth said no, but her body said yes" bull. There are no safe words, etc

    2) it ends abruptly, like it's half a fic

     


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  • From MotekElm on October 30, 2018

    I love Hermione's realistic reaction to being dominated. 

    Harry is being a dick, but it's still a great story


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  • From MotekElm on October 30, 2018

    I love it already. Dominant Harry is delicious


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  • From ANON - Alytiger on January 27, 2017

    THAT UNDERHANDED LITTLE SHIT COLLARED HER WOTHOUT HER PERMISSION!


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  • From ANON - Alytiger on January 27, 2017

    This is my favorite. Love the store. 


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  • From ANON - Alytiger on January 27, 2017

    that's friggen great


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  • From ANON - Alytiger on January 27, 2017

    this fic is just on the right side of too much. 


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  • From ANON - Luvs2read88 on January 14, 2017

    I am so wrapped up in this story! What do you mean the end for now? please tell me there will be more?!!

     


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  • From ANON - MzPearlz on October 26, 2016

    How could youuuuu, I wanted I wanted!! I will go hunt down this AU. Also. I would love to like...go back to your other story, before this one, and correct everything from before Electric * pet started betaing.... >:D just minor mispellings and wrong words that were just random things.  Hit me up! My email is this guest name with gmail :D its possibly all lowercase but yea. XD. I loved le story though I didn't like how stubborn Hermione was being but that was the point, yea?   Other than that, keep it up!


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  • From Briste on September 14, 2016

    Are the other stories of this series up? If so which ones are they? I am completely in love with this story!


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  • From 17Butterflys on December 05, 2015
    I just found your story and love it. Have you written a sequel or a continuation? I would love to see the continuation of the Snape/Ginny pairing and the Harry/Hermione pairing. Please let me know!!!

    ~17Butterflys
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 09, 2015
    I loved this story! Are you going to continue it?
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