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Reviews for The Long Road

By : SinisterMe
  • From ANON - MrE-Quecky on September 12, 2014
    Yay, lovely update!
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  • From ANON - lotsofdogsus on September 12, 2014
    I am truly enjoying your story, I appreciate the regular updates (you did scare me with the late one----I was "oh no, don't drop it now"), I look forward to seeing more of how Teddy and Severus' relationship develops and would love to see Teddy tell Harry off. I did enjoy Remus finally speaking up and hoped that is where you were going with Harry showing up while Remus was doped on his healing potion.
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  • From ANON - Annika on September 11, 2014
    I have yet to read a chapter of this story that I don't like! Or even one that seems off, unnatural, or out of character. Dialogue can be tricky and you've done it well. Snape and Harry have a bad history between them, yet they are both older and also outside of the professor/student setting, and are actually able to have a deeper, more open conversation - though tension is still high and tempers short. It's a sort of balance, and it's well-written. I did not see that ending coming at all - Snape hinting at actually wanting Harry to keep checking up on them, not just to be a friend for Remus and Teddy but to hold Snape accountable because he's still afraid he'll start abusing his power. Between that and Remus's talk with Harry (go Remus!!), it seems like Harry & co.'s visits will be more predictable and settled now, instead of being so random and disruptive. Hermione's calm inquisitiveness tempers Harry's brash accusations well. He's been a real jerk so far, but from his perspective that's warranted. We just get the story of Severus and Remus' little fledgling relationship, which just gets better all the time, and so Harry seems so irritatingly obnoxious. Nice that their visit provided us with a reason to get more details about the full moon plan, too. I always wish the chapters were longer...but I'm glad you're updating as regularly as you are! This has become my favorite happy fictional world to get lost in. Who needs a good rom-com when you've got perfectly-done Snupin, right? :)

    p.s. I'm definitely mentally labeling Harry's fond remembering look (in response to Snape's comment) as a Drarry reference. That was a fun little allusion :)
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  • From ANON - Annika on September 08, 2014
    I read chapter 31 when you posted it but never commented on it, so I reread again today. This story continues to be a favorite of mine, and this chapter was so sweet :) It
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  • From ANON - MrE-Quecky on September 06, 2014
    kind of forgot to check in for updates, so I had a bunch of new chapters to read and I absolutely loooooved all of the updates! Still a wonderful story!
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  • From Kayrox133 on September 05, 2014
    Praise! Cheers! The wording of the bond was great. I am so glad Remus is getting a positive bond instead of one so restrictive. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter...
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2014
    Wow, that was really fast! I never expected to see another chapter so soon. I really like the rules of the bond and I thought you did a good job coming up with them. It will be interesting to see how they come into play, and if the ministry will except them. Thanks for another awesome installment, can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Lin on September 02, 2014

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  • From ANON - kakashi on September 02, 2014
    I really love this story! I never liked Remus/Severus pairing but your story changed my opinion. I love it.
    The rules are good I like it.
    I think Severus should do something about Harry. Harry is very unrespectful and forgets that Severus as Remus' master can do how he wishes. Harry can't have a say in this.
    So he should come to Severus home like he is the owner of it. Severus should remind Harry that this is his home and that he can't bother him like he wishes.
    I can understand that Severus want Remus to have support but like this it shouldn't be. Because this is his home and he want to have some peace. He should tell this to Harry.
    I'm sorry for writing down my own ideas but Harry is getting on my nerves. Somebody should tell him how unrespectful he is. Hermione and Ron shouldn't interfere in this too.
    Hahaha you wrote your story so well and your characters are so real that I'm so agitated
    Really I love your story and you did a great job!
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 01, 2014
    Awesome!! Sev and Remus being big kids is sooo cool!!! Awesome about the bond! Full moon right? 🐶🐶
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  • From ANON - Ethereal on September 01, 2014
    I came across this story a little while back and have literally not stopped reading it since I came across it. You have cost me many sleepless nights and for that I am grateful. Your writing is wonderful and I have not seen these characters portrayed in such a way but I really love it. I do love the direction you're going in and I hope you continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Annika on August 30, 2014
    I think the direction you
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  • From ANON - Kapowallace on August 30, 2014
    I loved the sex scene last chapter! There was so much buildup and waiting, and it was worth every second of it! I think it's great how the bond is loving and how they're adjusting to being around one another now that it's done. I can't wait to find out what these rules are! Keep it up!
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  • From Sealpotter on August 30, 2014
    I get to be your 100th review... cool. I really loved the last chapter. It was beautiful. I tend to write other pairings, but this has really captivated me and brought me out of my comfort zone. It's unique, intriguing and well written.
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  • From ANON - Dex on August 28, 2014
    The Long Road is so perfect. Snupin is my personal favorite and this is Snupin at it's very best; Sev is not out of character (in my opinion) in any sense yet the story sheds a light on him that highlights his intricacies and the tragedy inside him and while Lupin's character doesn't show at first he is carefully being glued back together as the story progresses, which is one sob fest after another. As for the plot, I could die happy seeing the pieces be put together (plot wise and the two wizards-wise) so brilliantly. I can't give enough praise, I just love this story so much and seeing it updated when it is makes (updates are consistent and quick, might I add) my week worth it! I am spreading word of this story to my potter-head friends like wildfire, because it's necessary everyone reads it. Fred? He is golden. I need more of this story ASAP!
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