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Reviews for The Long Road

By : SinisterMe
  • From ANON - La Fran on April 02, 2014
    Great chapter. I love your story, it is just perfect
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  • From ANON - pooh on March 29, 2014
    chp 4 trying to put chp num in reviews...frustrating when reading others review to which chap they are referring...
    you are such a good writer, your mind is creative and you express it well! as for grammar and spelling errors...I have seen so many with considerably worse...`they should learn from you!
    this story so far, has me furious...excellent character and story development has me wanting to ring someone's neck...the cruelty to children and others always gets me!
    now, on to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - pooh on March 29, 2014
    Loving it. The statement "If wishes were horses,...priceless! I have always thought that there should be a better ending and you have found it! Thank you...looking forward to the next chapters!!!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 28, 2014
    This is such a good story!!! Continuing to enjoy it. Very well written with few errors and a great plot. Characters are acting in natural ways for them but still uniquely. Can't wait for next chapters.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 19, 2014
    This is a great story. Teddy is adorable. What a smart little sweetie! I'll be glad when Remus is more healed and awake...healed enough to move around a bit. I don't mind if he is hurt enough to need Severus' help...hint hint.
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  • From ANON - NarutoVixin on March 19, 2014
    I hate being sick all I do is sleep and if I'm ever hurt were I need time in a Hospital its even worse
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  • From Ciara_D on March 19, 2014
    I believe you, all Remus can do is sleep. Without magic I'd be thinking he should be closer to a coma after everything. This chapter was really heartwarming. Looking forward to more.
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on March 18, 2014
    love it would love to see Remus a bit more but cant wait for an update
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on March 17, 2014
    Loving this completely. Can't wait for the next installment. Update soon please.
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  • From Ciara_D on March 17, 2014
    Ok, Fred the house elf is reaching hero status. I do wonder how long before Teddy shows more of the damage that was inflicted on him. One does not simple get over a whipping. Or maybe this is his coping mechanism. He's a wonderful boy and I hope against hope Snape find a nice easy spell to use to satisfy the enslavement requirement. No one will be happy if he's chained. He needs to be free.

    I don't know if Lupin would even know what to do if he did become free, at least right now. He's so fragile.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 16, 2014
    Great chapter. Looking forward to more. So far it is a fun story and well done. I like the pairing I hope you are planning...Lupin & Severus. Teddy is adorable. Remus didn't react too much to his wife being dead...hmmm.
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  • From ANON - Lin on March 15, 2014
    Love this. I like how you bring in bits of Sev's childhood and Teddy is just too cute for words!!!
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  • From pittwitch on March 15, 2014
    Please double check your numbers. The identifiers changing is quite distracting.
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  • From Ciara_D on March 14, 2014
    I didn't know how you were going to pull off the inheritance but well done! You're handling this plot line well. I didn't think you could make me buy into it but you are, hook line and sinker. Please update soon, because I will be back. Cheers and thanks for writing - Ciara
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on March 14, 2014
    Severus is softer and more understanding than he thinks. Can't wait for Remus to wake up!
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