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Reviews for Remaking Destiny

By : LadyLaran
  • From Cateagle on February 07, 2022

    Okay, this latest chapter moves matters along nicely while covering a number of items.  I daresay that an in-depth dig into Dumbledore's background is going to turn up some interesting items.  Of course, the information could be fed to a suitable reporter (Rita Skeeter?) rather than coming from the various Houses in blood fued.  Methinks Albus Dumbledore is going to find himself more and more backfooted as time goes by.


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  • From Cateagle on February 07, 2022

    *whistles* Dumbledore has to be furious at how some of the trials have turned out and with how he has been effectively neutered from affecting punishments.  I reckon being  powerless like that is something he has well earned.


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  • From staar on January 10, 2020

    Happy New Year to you !!!!!!!! you made mine when I saw the update :):):):)...love it when a plan starts take place....nice to see how this family are showing that they are smarter than Dumbbledork!!!!!! thansk again :):):)


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  • From MackMackinnon on May 30, 2019

    Hi, just finished reading all chapters to date. WOW! I love being against Dumbledor. Magnificant that you included the Malfoys and have turned Remus around. Please continue this captivating story.

    MackMackinnon


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  • From Simplysubmissive on May 17, 2019

    I just found this story and love it!  Can't wait to read more 


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  • From phoenix-rob on May 16, 2019

    Great story - can't wait for the next chapter


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  • From staar on October 06, 2018

    I see that you have started another story (shadows of the Past) are you going to update Remaking Destiny again !!!!! pls. update it it's so good !!!:):):):)):):)


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  • From DelinaStorm on July 27, 2018

    Very very nice, great characters, original concept,  I just wish it would continue!


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  • From Innocent_fairy on June 05, 2016
    i was wondering if you plan too finish this story its truly great so far :)
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  • From BAFan on April 27, 2016
    Ch. 7

    Wonderful chapter! Usually I skim over rituals, but this one was short and to the point, no unnecessarily elaborate preparations. Loved the addition of Lily.


    ~Debbie
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  • From BAFan on April 27, 2016
    Ch. 6

    Well, I thought I had left a review at the end of the Death Eater trials, but apparently it didn't go through. Let's hope this one does!

    Minister Bagnold's questioning of the accused Death Eaters was succinct and to the point, but I think covered everything pertinent. I'm glad that Snape appears to be free from Dumbledore's clutches, but I'm sure that wily (and in this fic, evil?) manipulator has a few tricks up his ridiculously flamboyant sleeves. Actually, I hope I'm misremembering that Algie Longbottom is very much under Albus's thumb and does his bidding in ways I won't go into in case I'm confusing this with another story. Anyway, it's good to see the Black family coming together.

    // 'I, Sirius Orion Black, Viscount Dyntagell, do hereby declare the marriage between Bellatrix Black Lestrange to be null and void. . . ."//

    Um, "between" requires another person's name: Rabastan or Rodolphus Lestrange (never can remember which one she married, lol). Or, simply, "I . . . declare the marriage OF Bellatrix Black Lestrange to be null and void."


    ~Debbie
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  • From BAFan on April 27, 2016
    Ch. 2

    Wow, so much going on in this chapter. I know I've read this story before as it was being posted, but it's been a while and my recollection of details is vague. Thank goodness Minister Bagnold is a sensible woman and will allow Sirius a trial.


    ~Debbie
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  • From BAFan on April 27, 2016
    Ch. 1 Addendum

    Aargh! I still messed up in that review! Okay, so:

    //"Someplace where he’ll be trained to take up the mantel of Lord Potter and fit into society,” James agreed, looking thoughtful. . . .//

    Should be "mantle." A mantel is the structure built above a fireplace.


    ~Debbie
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  • From BAFan on April 27, 2016
    I'm reposting my first review of this because I removed it by mistake. Don't ask how. *eye roll* Luckily I was able to copy it before it disappeared. Note the date of the review.

    BAFan 2014-04-21 id # 3001417640
    Ch. 1

    Very interesting start! I like the change in Petunia's character, and that she grieves for Lily and wants to keep in touch with Harry. How is Callidora related to Augusta Longbottom, Neville's grandmother? I like Callidora; she will see that Sirius doesn't spend twelve years in Azkaban and is thinking of details that are usually forgotten, such as the Potters' burial site and that their belongings from Godric's Hollow are taken care of. She's a sharp lady!

    Harkin?? That's different! Makes a change from all the Harrisons and Hadrians I often see. I don't really understand why so many authors feel the need to change Harry's name, but so be it. *shrug* Not a criticism, just a comment.

    "'We need to make sure that Harry goes to where we want him to go and not where Dumbledore thinks will keep him humble and malleable,' she said to her husband as she kept moving about the parlor."

    That last part - the humble and malleable bit - kind of bothers me. Lily made the jump from merely mistrusting Dumbledore to guessing his plan for Harry without any visible evidence. Because it is a common theme in fanfics, your readers are familiar with it, but why did Lily make that assumption? Maybe that will be explained in future updates; if so, feel free to ignore my comment, lol.

    I spotted a couple of typos:

    // . . . When the elderly form of the wizard disappeared, green eyes hardened as they watched the man disparate from view.//

    Disapparate, not disparate.

    //"'Someplace where he’ll be trained to take up the mantel of Lord Potter and fit into society,” James agreed, looking thoughtful. . . .//

    ~Debbie
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  • From staar on April 22, 2016
    you made my day in seeing an update !!!!!!!!
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