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Reviews for How Windows Break

By : Secretness
  • From AileenSnape on June 28, 2016
    I thought it was really well writen and I hope you continue it I'd be interested in reading more. Your writing style is really nice and though the theme is dark it's well writen and reads quite nicely. You did  a good job on it. Really kept with the characters which I really liked.
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  • From Kayrox133 on September 05, 2014
    The way you wrote that story was absolutely beautiful. I was hooked at the second line. Smite is a POS but Snape's words, behaviour, etc was amazing. I bet it felt great to get that story line out of your head to pen and paper. Thank you for sharing and, of course, I want more.
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  • From Scribbler on September 04, 2014
    I enjoyed this very much. I particularly liked how paternally aggressive Arthur Weasley was. This story has good bones, and I'd love to see you flesh it out a bit.
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  • From ANON - snape_lust on September 03, 2014
    This was a very powerful one-shot. In the end Severus is correct. It doesn't matter that Smite is a rapist, they still need his information and for all the show of support its way too little, way too late. Especially concerning DD and his lack of oversight towards the children in his care.

    This could be expanded in many directions. DD having too much power, too many duties to fulfill any of them effectively (not to mention trying to be general in a war) and the consequences are borne on the backs of innocent children. It could also lead to a discussion of why war is so bad: in order to win, morals and ethics must be compromised. Laws must be overlooked or broken. Justice will need to be outside of the law, and that's what they are fighting against. I would hope that someone would put a gaes or castration on Smite and after the war, if he's still alive, is brought to justice. But it doesn't help severus or any of the other children he raped. Smite won.

    A great story and I look forward to more of your writings, whether a continuation of this story or more one-shots.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on September 03, 2014
    i would love to see this as s tory! i really like this and can to wait read more :)
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  • From ANON - Spiderskelly on September 02, 2014
    You should definitely continue! I loved this! It added a ton of depth to Sev's character.
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