Reviews for Hello Gorgeous

BY : Accidental-Ducky


  • From ANON - Voldemortified on September 29, 2014

    Intriguing story, and overall pretty good writing. I'd love to read more!

    One thing keeping it from being easy to read - the writing is actually quite good, however I'd suggest getting someone to proofread your work for correct use of tense - it is all over the place, and rarely correct.

    Keep writing! It'll only get better.

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