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Reviews for Songs of Regret

By : RavieSnake
  • From Trelweny on November 18, 2014
    Fascinating story. How the Pearl erases regrets is very detailed and intriguing. I am really enjoying all the similarities you're giving Draco and Hermione from having the same intense regret at the same moment to their firstborn children sharing a birthday. Would it be seer-like of me to propose that when they're together in This timeline their children are twins? ;) Each was after all a mini-me of their respective sent-back parent.

    Interesting bit about Hermione's song magic. Good for canon purposes that it didn't respond during her torture, though I'm curious how having a battle theme played off during the canon battle of Hogwarts. Maybe more on that latter?

    I'd also Eventually like to know the song between her and Harry... if she has to have been with him those reasons are the best, imho. Similarly for how you portrayed her and Draco coming together so quickly This timeline. I'm glad you had a good reason for their falling together so quickly.

    I liked how you worked in the canon story and epilogue. I'm crossing my fingers for a "more things fixed than rendered" playing out of things to come due to their time-travel. So many lives could be saved... I can only hope.

    Look forward to seeing Dumbledore's reaction to their situation, as well as how you portray him. I personally have a hard time viewing him as all good and grandfatherly... but at the same time I believe he Tries, just that like so many humans he sometimes falls far short. But then I can be quite biased on that front, abhorring the way he used Severus to the degree he did. Plus I'm not quite sure I can abide his other manipulations but oh well. That's why we have fanfiction. ;)

    Thanks so much for writing!
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  • From ANON - magi on November 17, 2014
    Great start! Looking forward to more, I like how you conceptualized a time-travel fic.
    The use of time-turner has become quite trite.. I hope a happy ending for Draco here, it got me when you
    wrote how devoted he was as a dad.

    Well, good luck. :)
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  • From ANON - angel0fmusic on November 17, 2014
    This is a rather interesting story. I like the idea so far and the development. I eagerly await the next update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 17, 2014
    Very interesting take on the D/H ship. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Whitney on November 17, 2014
    Really good story can't wait for more. Really good plot. Anxiously awaiting an update
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