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Reviews for The Mandatory Reproduction Statute

By : Juliesnaps
  • From HarryGinny4eva on December 30, 2014
    Well, I for one, am thrilled by the 2 updates! I am glad she's realized her behavior and will hopefully rectify it. I do get her issues, but since there is no way around things, at least she got a good deal. By her reaction to him that morning, I would say she got a really good deal. lol Thanks again!! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on December 30, 2014
    The masturbation scene was good, don't worry. Excellent update!
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  • From ANON - TinkerBabe7 on December 30, 2014
    I'm liking your story and you're doing good at the sexual scenes.
    The only criticism I have is that in the letter you have two different years. "August 22nd, 2005. Failure to comply by the stroke of midnight on August 25th, 2008" you have 2005 at first than 2008 after. Besides fixing that main thing I think it's pretty well overall.
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  • From lexiatel on December 30, 2014
    Loved it! The Ministry is being very unfair though. They act like it's so easy to have sex with just anyone, lol. Typical government though, they don't care. Heh. Wonder how many of them are in on this whole law.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on December 29, 2014
    I know I should feel badly for her, and I do, but I feel more awful for him. He took a chance on some happiness and is getting nothing for his trouble. I know she is upset and angry, but she's got to stop reading into everything he says and lashing out at him, as it's not his fault the MoM sucks. Thanks for the update and I look forward to more soon! HG4eva

    Happy New Year!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2014
    Good chapter
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on December 28, 2014
    Severus is endearing in this chapter. I can't believe that MacGonnegall actually made an awkward situation worse, that's usually Snape's talent. Well written.
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  • From ANON - staar on December 28, 2014
    Wow poor Hermoine, can't believe they (you) did that !!!!!! now lets see what happens next, hope they get along cause I like them as a pair !!!!!
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  • From lexiatel on December 28, 2014
    LOL at your reply. Forgive me, I have been wanting to write something similar to this, and that question runs around in my head all the time. SO I was only wondering how someone else would handle it. Hehe :)

    Thanks for your response, and I can't wait for another chapter. I like this Severus :)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on December 10, 2014
    I hope this is the real him, because I like him this way. :-) I feel badly for her, but he is doing his best to make it easier, so I hope she starts to reciprocate and at least try to make this work. Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - staar on December 09, 2014
    ok moving along now ....let's see what happens next with them !!!! thanks !!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2014
    Good, a little progress between the two.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2014
    Good start.
    Just wanted to let you know that you called Susan Lavender once.
    It was when Hermione thinks about Ron getting Susan pregnant and how he could not leave "Lavender" to raise the kid on her own and how Susan was pregnant for the third time now.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on December 09, 2014
    This is a good start. I'm confused about one part though, did Ron marry Susan Bones or Lavender Brown? That part wasn't clear.
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  • From lexiatel on December 08, 2014
    Lovely start.. I wonder though.. if neither parent wants the responsibility of child raising, what happens to the child???
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