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Reviews for To revel with a Veela

By : Valehtelija
  • From ANON - nahte on March 31, 2015
    I really like how even though Fleur started this out as a game she's slowly getting more and more invested, I hope this'll have a happy eneding, because it's really hot, and something sad would just ruin that.
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  • From TTrunks on March 21, 2015
    I really like this story. I like that you have a "Sort of" sub Harry, but haven't made him a soft spined weakling. Your Harry makes sense, he's a bit young and inexperienced, so Fleur can sort of control him. But he's still the boy who at eleven stood up to a dark lord and won. Whose killed a massive basilisk, and took on 100 dementors.

    Part of me does hope we get to see Fleur see the Basilisk corpse.

    I also like that you don't have Fleur being irredeemably evil or something like that. She seems like a bit of a bitch, but at the same time not necessarily cruel. She does care for Harry even if not exactly in a healthy way. It will be interesting to see i Harry saves Gabriella this time and what events happen afterwards. Also if Fleur's friends will end up involved with the two.
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  • From ANON - red demon on February 19, 2015
    Holy shit that was hot. Harry is a sexy beast. He and Fleur destroyed one another. Now I really can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ToxiclyPoison on February 06, 2015
    Really Enjoying this story so far, its one of my favourite "new reads" and i cant wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - red demon on February 06, 2015
    Wow that was a hot chapter. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - joeparas on February 06, 2015
    This story is actually flirting with being really very dark, but not actually being so. Yet.

    It would be kinda wondrous if, with the dynamics of their relationship staying in tact (Fleur being the dominatrix), this somehow ends in a light tone with her falling as hard for Harry as he has for her. Harry would have to be strong, but still a sub, and I'm not sure how that works.

    Equally, this could all blow up into an angstfest.

    That would be a shame.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2015
    I love the start to the story and the idea. Im always looking for good stories about Fleur that have her actively using her allure. Cant wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on January 22, 2015
    now you listed m/m as part of the warnings personally as far as those pairings go i would want to see harry and the creevey brothers. colin and dennis worship harry and would do ANYTHING for him.
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  • From Sherlocked1971 on January 21, 2015
    Come on Harry show her. Let him flash his anger......
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