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Reviews for The Xeoforce Equation

By : Esequell
  • From jenosequa on December 11, 2017

    You are such an amazing writer!! I’m dying to find out what happens. I hope you are able to finish this story. 


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  • From Rumpelyssa on July 26, 2016

    This is such a beautiful tale of thriller and romance - I really would like to know what happens next x

    I just melt at the idea of being Lucius Malfoy's Kitten!


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  • From professorflo on April 04, 2016
    Do you have any plans to continue this? I really love tyour story. The way you write Lucius' character is excellent.
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  • From Oceangirl87 on June 16, 2015
    Such a perfect cliff hanger. The ministry has a tendency to be so corrupt
    It can barely stand on its so called pillars.

    I can't wait for more I hope your muse sticks around for us all!
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  • From Severus1snape on June 02, 2015
    I love this
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  • From Trelweny on June 01, 2015
    High Ones! They can't catch a break, can they?
    ...I'm starting to really hate the MoM... Not like I had a good opinion of them from the books anyway...

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on June 01, 2015
    Exciting!
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  • From Severus1snape on March 12, 2015
    I missed this! Great chapter, cannot wait for more :D
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on March 11, 2015
    I'm glad Lucius is better and it's gratifying to see Lucius' and Hermione's relationship growing closer.
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  • From Severus1snape on February 12, 2015
    Lovely postie
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  • From Trelweny on February 11, 2015
    Gah! I don't think my poor heart can handle so much! First Misty... then almost Lucius as well! :tries to calm down:

    Wonderfully written, though I DO wish it hadn't felt like consecutive heart-attacks.

    I did love the bonding between Lucius and Hermione. Was there a little bit more there than typical? Seems so.

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From JezeBelDK on January 30, 2015
    Aaah - that was really nice! So many wanna-be-writers are almost desperate to bring intimacy into their story way too soon. I prefer it to slow down and this first kiss was beyond perfect!
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  • From BAFan on January 30, 2015
    Ch. 5

    "He's fast, she thought, breathlessly. Faster than Harry or Ron."

    *gasp* Heresy! 😉

    " '. . . What, may I ask, would happen to my chances of using other less...savoury...acquaintanceships in the future, if we're caught clearly helping the Ministry!'"

    Um, they were photographed posing outside the building just before the Aurors raided it. Wouldn't that make those unsavory characters a bit suspicious, especially since he wasn't arrested? Or is the photo strictly for the Auror files?

    That was quite a fight between Lucius and Hermione. The bastard almost strangled her and he did break her wrist, but she didn't back off. Go, Hermione!
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  • From JezeBelDK on January 30, 2015
    Chapter 4 read and thoroughly enjoyed! I'm not usually a fan of Hermione but I can be persuaded by either a good summary or my own boredom ;) This is well-written and interesting, it's different and I like it so much that I'm even willing to ignore that Harry is with Ginny (-simply don't like her!).
    I don't have time to write more - there are still chapters to read!

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  • From BAFan on January 30, 2015
    Ch. 4

    That was horrifying.
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