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  • From ANON - starr on May 04, 2015
    shit !!!! they cut off Scop's hair !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG how could you !!!! well at least all his parts are still there and these 2 ass *oles know Hermione and the rest !!!!!!!!! man please update soon !!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - kitty5tatts on May 01, 2015
    I do like the way this story is flowing, and as far as Draco & Mione's relationship...it should be going this slow regardless of their past. She's on the job and he just had his son kidnapped. Wife aside. Thanx for the tale so far!
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  • From ANON - starr on April 29, 2015
    wow another box !!!!! not good and you have me getting a little sick here that your hurting little ones !!!!! sorry !!!!!! can't wait to find out why she left !!!! and she seems to know Draco really well, did they have a thing in the past or what ??? Hope to see an update soon !!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Trelweny on March 27, 2015
    Slow relationship is good. Easier to explain that way, especially in light of everything going on.

    Thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Victoria on March 23, 2015
    If you're a parent, any story dealing with the kidnapping of children makes you fearful. It was horrifying to learn these little children are being kept in cages -- some as long as two years! Now, it's dreadful to find that these thugs severed a finger. I hope you solve the case quickly and let the relationship between Draco and Hermione simmer along afterwards.
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  • From Trelweny on March 20, 2015
    and if our first look at the kidnappers didn't get across that at least one of those involved is a very sick S.O.B. ...then the contents of that package certainly did.

    Wow, Draco really did mean it when he said he'd help. Poor guy. But better helping than NOT, and sitting around going crazy doing nothing towards finding one's child.

    This is very well written, but I can't shake the feeling I'm going to regret starting it. :weak laugh: I don't tend to like scary/dark things...

    Thanks so much for writing.
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  • From ANON - pickles on March 17, 2015
    oh my.... please let it be a finger from one that has already been seen at a funeral home
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  • From ANON - loveinthemadness on March 17, 2015
    You have no idea how excited I got when I saw you had updated this story! I love this original mystery & romance concept. The character dynamic and interaction is so well written. I was kind of relieved when Draco had an emotional outpouring over his son's kidnapping, and that Hermione was there for it. That Cliffie is driving us all crazy though- Please have mercy and update soon! :)
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  • From ANON - Bunni on March 16, 2015
    Very great start to the story, another mystery inside a mystery. Can't wait for more chapters!

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  • From ANON - nandini on February 14, 2015
    Looking forward for new chapter and where the story leads to
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  • From ANON - Victoria on February 14, 2015
    You've created a gripping story! I couldn't stop reading the first three chapters even long enough to review. You have managed to create multiple layers of tension. There is the lingering tension between Hermione and her former friends. the animosity and tension between Harry, Hermione and Draco, sexual tension between Draco and Hermione (at least on her part) and the overarching tension of the terrifying kidnapping crime. It's so tense all around, it feels like anything could snap at any moment! Well done!

    Your criminals really are monstrous, keeping little children in cages! Some of them kept that way for two years! I am eager to see what their ransom demands will be and even more eager to see Hermione crack the case and throw these horrible men into Azkaban. I hope you have a lot of this already written so we don't have to wait too long to find out what will happen next. Love the story.
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  • From ANON - staar on February 13, 2015
    well Harry and Draco please they both should grow up....Hermione maybe find out why she left !!!!!! Hermione and Draco don't know there ...the 2 that have the kid wow !!!!poor kids not going to be happy if you kill them !!!!!
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  • From aussiegirl1990 on February 09, 2015
    The idea of this story holds a lot of promise. I'm already loving it!
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  • From ANON - Carly on February 08, 2015
    Very interesting! Sitting in anticipation for the next chapter!
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  • From Trelweny on February 08, 2015
    Interesting start. I expected Hermione to set some sort of instruction or procedures for them though, now that she's in charge. As is she only made sure everyone was up to date with what had happened with the missing children so far and confirmed she was in charge. What questions could they have asked?

    Curious. I look forward to seeing this unfold and I hope the children are alive...

    Thanks for writing.
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