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Reviews for Little Empty Cauldron

By : bettycoltrane
  • From ANON - BlackMaiden on February 18, 2015
    I wanted to come by and give a review on this story, seeing as they're aren't any. Besides, I really liked this story.

    I love the innuendos and the cliff hanger of this story. It gives just enough detail to suggest tension and some hot, steamy smut, yet cuts you off, making you crave more.

    I wrote a story, similar in style (innuendos and suggestions, yet no heavy detailed smut), and it was a hit. This story reminded me of the naughty feeling I had when I wrote my story, knowing I was teasing my readers, deliciously. It draws a reader in. Great job with achieving that goal. Very few writers can execute an ending while maintaining the readers attention and make them truly crave more, yet be satisfied. It's quite the feat, but you nabbed it!

    There were some minor typos, nothing you or your beta can't fix(if you have one), but other than that, excellent story! I'd love to read a smut one shot based on this story plotline.

    I'll be following your work and adding you in my reading list. Hope to read more from you soon. My email is open if you want to keep in touch.

    Darkest Regards,

    BlackMaiden
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