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Reviews for Carry on my Wayward Son

By : BlackDawnRose
  • From ANON - Emma Pressnell on November 10, 2015
    Wow love the plot and how you write, it is just brilliant!
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  • From BAFan on November 10, 2015
    Ch. 5

    Wow. Interesting revelations abound, though I don't understand why Voldemort felt the need to punish Harry so severely.


    ~Debbie
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  • From djaddict on November 09, 2015
    I can't wait to read the story from Severus.

    Good chapter
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  • From Jan on November 09, 2015
    I can't wait to hear their story, or how the dark lord will take it, so please update chapter 6 soon. 😁
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  • From ANON - SlyhindorMalfoy on November 08, 2015
    Very good chapter! So many emotions. I love the relationship between Harry and Sev. And I'm curious as to who loves him, hehehehe. The punishment was rly good and believable. I think it's admirable how you show him having feelings yet still keep him in character. I hope you get what I mean. Is Bella going to get punished???? If yes plz write it!!! Looking forward to more. :)
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  • From ANON - Silver on November 07, 2015
    This is good so far. But I have a question: where's Hedwig?
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  • From ANON - starr on November 07, 2015
    OMG so snape is Harry's father ??????? or what !!!!! so confused but I know the answers will come ...Thanks for the update and pls. hope to see you soon :):):) man so much suspense LOVE IT !!!!!!!
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  • From djaddict on November 01, 2015
    Very good! I love seeing revenge taken against Umbridge!

    Iagree, I dislike when Harry turns evil crazy. Dark is good but suddenly a psychopath is just not a good read.
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  • From rigger42 on October 30, 2015
    Okay, to answer your question about parseltongue, if there might be circumstances when Tom and Harry would speak to each other in parseltongue, it might be a good thing to set apart from the start. Though with Harry being the only other known parseltongue, I can't see them doing so until/unless his identity is revealed at least to the Inner Circle. However, it would add to clarity to have some kind of mark. I've seen it done with :: on either side of the dialogue and many times italics are used for silent thoughts but whatever is consistent and comfortable for you.

    That said, I think you've made it pretty clear so could continue as is. LOL.

    Regarding Umbridge, I like that Harry was a little sickened but it is really a more brutal expression of his sense of justice. He believed punishing her was necessary and right, and he wasn't going to let his squeamishness get in the way. Also, of course, he refuses to show any weakness in the Dark Lord's service. This should impress Bella and Lestrange and make a good first impression, right?

    I hope Voldemort gives Harry some kind of name - how about Bellerophon? LOL. Just something to dial down the mystery and also give them something to call him beside the Dark Lord's Pet. I wonder how long it will be before they decide he's a sex toy? Hmmm....is he allowed to defend himself? I notice he gets to keep his wand.

    Harry's mindset, the full acceptance that he is just marking time and checking off a few goals before he dies, is rather heartbreaking, and really gives this a different flavor. I like that he isn't moping about or being a martyr, and hope he will continue to contribute, since he has tossed in his lot with Voldemort. I'm also curious to learn Voldemort's goals.
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  • From rigger42 on October 30, 2015
    This is really fantastic so far. I tend to be fond of the Harry Goes Dark stories, but they usually involve him going to the Dark Lord as an equal, not a supplicant, and there is something so unique and interesting about him going as a sacrificial lamb. Obviously Luna, Remus, Ginny, Hermione and the Twins are on his list...is Draco as well? I look forward to learning why Luna is nursing Severus and just what happened there...
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  • From ANON - Bill on October 28, 2015
    Love your story. Like the balance you are trying to achieve between Harry changing but more to protect his friends and get some revenge than because he is evil. Love the way Voldemort is still his sadistic self but with his sanity so able to go for his goals instead of killing just for fun and torturing his followers over nothing. But I can't wait for this discussion between Harry and Voldemort when we will learn some of the background story.
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  • From ANON - starr on October 28, 2015
    OMG that was great what Harry did to pig nose there !!!!!!! glad she got what she deserved !!!! hope Harry gets up and saves Snape ok...don't hurt my dark one now ...Well thanks for the update 1!!!! :):) can't wait for more
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  • From teriwright on October 18, 2015
    I like the beginning and look forward to more. I suspect it wont be smooth sailing for Harry. This is the Dark Lord.
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  • From BAFan on October 17, 2015
    Ch. 3

    Goodness. "Intriguing" is definitely the word for this very interesting AU. No wonder Harry is so bitter! Does Harry realize the implications of what he said when he asked Voldemort if he required anything further from Harry - or what the Dark Lord might infer from that offer; namely, sexual favors?

    "' . . . As far as anyone else will know you are my newest death eater with who I have found favour due to your bringing me the information on Moody
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  • From ANON - LeFay on October 17, 2015
    Hi is there any way that you can mark when Harry,Nagini and Voldemort are talki in parseltoung?? Like
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