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Reviews for Dracken Awakening

By : wolfwriter
  • From Jan on July 28, 2015
    Chapter 4 please.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 27, 2015
    I would think that Harry would be the Alpha because he is the more powerful of the three. Age and size don't really mean a lot when it comes to magical power.
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  • From CDGaymer on July 27, 2015
    very good 3rd chapter, nice pairing as well with Harry, Charlie,and Neville
    Ill be wondering if there will be any extra mates and who will be the alpha dom.
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  • From ANON - starr on July 27, 2015
    poor Harry and Charlie yes he is older but Harry is stronger so he needs to stop and think before he speaks !!!!! Nevelle is going to have to fix it cause Harry is really upset now ....Thanks you so much for the update and BTW Harry needs to tell Charlie bout his mom and brother and sister what they have done so he knows where Harry is coming from :):):):)):
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  • From Jan on July 06, 2015
    Good start, a bit rushed but still good, however you might want to reread your previous writings, because you had wrote before when Harry first read the book the goblins gave him, that he told Remus that he was a dominate dracken and his submissive mate could have more then one mate, also that his submissive could be either male or female; then after Harry shows off his wings, they get the letter from Dumbledore and Harry isn't sure what that keening sound he hears is, and he and Remus go to the library only to have Remus tell Harry everything that Harry had told him all over again and Harry acts all surprise that he could have a male submissive? See errors like that could mess up the whole story, but it's still the beginning and it can easily be fixed, just make sure to reread your previous writings so you don't make the same mistakes.
    Hope to read chapter 3 soon.
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  • From ANON - starr on July 03, 2015
    ok so this is going to be a Nev/Harry and more ? Story good !!!!!!!!!!! when is the revenge coming !!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on July 03, 2015
    Well that's different. I would have thought Harry was the submissive... or the dominant with several submissives. I don't think I've seen something with this pairing in this way before. I look forward to seeing how this plays out.
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  • From CDGaymer on July 02, 2015
    great start, i hope it continues
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  • From ANON - Embry on July 02, 2015
    Umm...okay...full of cliches
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  • From BAFan on July 02, 2015
    Another bad, manipulative Dumbledore, Weasleys, and Hermione story? The fandom is overflowing with those, so this will need to be memorable in order to stand out. The dracken theme is interesting though.

    Oh, Ginny's name is Ginevra, not Ginerva.
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  • From ANON - Christy89 on July 02, 2015
    Interesting there is not yet a bad dumbledore with the draken theme looking forward to seeing how u take it
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