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Reviews for Becoming a Demon

By : joey888
  • From robert77833 on July 25, 2015
    Could you write something along the lines of Lily managing to shake off Harry's influence (possibly due to their lack of contact while he's at Hogwarts) and restrain him to try convert him back, only for James to reappear and the two of them to double team her against her will and slowly but completely tame her into Harry's pet. Would like to read her reaction/fear seeing James again and him mentioning how he took her previously.

    hopefully that could be a 2 part series with that being the first part and the second one covering the next day or a few days later showing the aftermath of her breaking in and her new attitude as Harry's pet (2nd part with Harry/Lily only).

    in general I'd like to read more Harry/Lily, even though I know this fic is going to include a ton of pairings
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  • From jamescun on July 24, 2015
    Plz write more
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  • From ANON - dark serpent cat on July 24, 2015
    Well I kind of wish you had done some male Dursley's earlier but too late now.

    I think the next chapter or two should focus on Harry "punishing" Ron and Hermione for not contacting him earlier.

    As for future ideas I was wondering if you would consider Hagrid/Harry?
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  • From jamescun on July 19, 2015
    Plz write more soon
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  • From Tesgura on July 19, 2015
    Rule the world? Is that like prophesized? Cuz that could be the 'power he knows not' and Harry could make EVERYONE his slut. Oh I can't wait for more! I love Dominant slut Harry!
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  • From jamescun on July 18, 2015
    Plz write more soon
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  • From ANON - she-who-waits-in-darkness on July 18, 2015
    This was a great fic so far looking forward to seeing more of it!
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