Click Here!

Reviews for Unexpected

By : Farahnaaz
  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 06, 2015
    I adore this story. I will admit that I would never have found it had you not posted your other story in Draco/Hermione as I never really stray outside of that board.
    I'm wondering now if either Draco will come with her when she does leave or if Hermione will face Bellatrix or Lucius in battle and they'll recognise Narcissa's wand and realise what Draco has done? I think that part of the reason that this is different from all of the other 'Good Draco/Bad Lucius' fics is that Draco hasn't jumped at the chance to say to Hermione that he wants to change sides, and I think that's the reason why I like it so much. That being said I'm so hoping for a happy ending for them both, I'm so emotionally invested in this story now that I think an angsty ending would break my heart o_O.
    I love the change of POV in this chapter and I think you perfectly described the uncertainty and insecurity and self doubt that most people feel when starting a new relationship.
    Can't wait for the next chapter :)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Pops on November 06, 2015
    i love this!! Throughout the reading of this story, my inner fangirl was squealing in delight. I really like how you've portrayed these two, especially the cute banter that goes on between them. Really, really looking forward to reading more from you!
    Report Review

  • From Nichole-Hermione on October 30, 2015
    Yay!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Victoria on October 27, 2015
    I've just re-read earlier chapters and all the way to this last chapter. Wonderful story! The slow build of their feelings as they work through the dramatic and domestic events that unfold is just right. Their 'date' at the Christmas market was especially sweet and romantic. I love how Tilly interacts with both of them, too. You asked what we think should happen next. Well, I'm sure there is some meaningful jewelry among Narcissa's belongings that Tilly retrieved. I hope Draco will tell Hermione how long he's had feelings for her and give her some piece of the family jewelry to make their relationship more formal and serious. I would also hope that some sort of magical enchantment could be part of the jewelry so they can rely on it to find and help each other. If Voldemort hasn't confiscated it, Narcissa's wand might be among her possessions and Draco could give it to Hermione --showing how much he trusts her....Whatever you decide happens next, please give us more soon. You've created a captivating war-time love story.
    Report Review

  • From ssdawn on October 27, 2015
    I know what I WANT to happen. I want her to
    stay with him and never leave. I'm afraid it
    will crush him completely if she does leave.
    Oh, I loved this chapter even with all of the turmoil and grief
    Draco was going through.
    Report Review

  • From Nichole-Hermione on October 26, 2015
    Awesome story I read the whole thing in the last two days!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the great work!!
    Report Review

  • From ssdawn on October 22, 2015
    What an amazing and powerful chapter!
    That must have been exhausting to write.
    Nice job!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Olivia on October 20, 2015
    Excellent, so very enjoyable. Thank you.
    Report Review

  • From MargeW76 on October 15, 2015
    Great story so far! Really excited to read more.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Danpear on October 07, 2015
    Great story! I enjoy the way they interact and how you don't let us in on what Hermione is thinking. Looking forward for the next chapters!
    Report Review

  • From ssdawn on October 06, 2015
    I'm thoroughly enjoying reading about their date, but I'm waiting for
    something bad to happen or someone to see them that shouldn't.
    I like the little ways that they are connecting.
    Report Review

  • From ssdawn on October 06, 2015
    Chapter 10's ending was so tragic, but beautiful.
    That was an amazingly well written scene.
    Report Review

  • From ssdawn on October 06, 2015
    I am loving this story from Draco's POV.
    It's a great story and I'm so glad I found it!
    Report Review

  • From Twinning on October 02, 2015
    Looking forward to seeing you finish this off
    Report Review

  • From Trelweny on October 02, 2015
    That was very cute. I adore Tilly's button storage.

    thanks for writing.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!