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Reviews for His Relinquishment

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  • From ANON - Jen on January 16, 2016
    Can't wait! He is going to fall head over heels for her soon. He isn't a rapist and that leaves potential for him to care for her.
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  • From ANON - LMazzella on January 16, 2016
    Absolutely loving this story! They are sooo going to fall in love and I can't wait!
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  • From Tassanaburrfoot on January 16, 2016
    I'm not sure if Hermione is smart in this or kinda dumb. I mean, on the one hand, she's running away from her captors, etc, but on the other hand, if she were to just stay, maybe he wouldn't abuse her so much? And most importantly, I think she would probably have a better chance of living, and living well I might add, if she complied. Don't get me wrong. I get it. No doubt if I were in her shoes, I might react the same way at first. (Ok, probably not because I've always found Draco to be rather attractive, but that's just me.)
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  • From ANON - angel_baby_10 on January 10, 2016
    Hm this is going to be tough...will the Slytherin get his way or will the Gryffindor prevail? I dunno who or what I put my money on: Blaise's device or Hermione's magical skills?
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  • From madmapper82 on January 09, 2016
    I hope Draco winds up groveling for his treatment of his wife. Pompous little ass. Or big ass.
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  • From ANON - Mady on January 08, 2016
    Thank you for the update. So...I am thinking Hermione cast wards and etcetera like she did when there were snatchers in the books and movies looking for them so she is undetectable. Blaise's machine is logged onto her signature, so does this mean she is unsafe or not? I would hope she is safe and her wards are stronger than his machine. Praying she is not caught because the machine led them to her. That would be awful.
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  • From Sherlocked1971 on January 04, 2016
    Free? Surely not.
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  • From ANON - angel baby 10 on January 04, 2016
    Wooow, this is a real game changer...idk but this feels a bit too easy...is he really gonna let her go like that?
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  • From ANON - Mitch on January 04, 2016
    Uhh did she forget the ring?
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  • From ANON - Mady on January 04, 2016
    You are awesome for updating quickly...! This was a big twist because I did not expect Hermione to esxape this soon although I am sure he will capture her soon...but I hope not...omg this s super promising.
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  • From RavieSnake on January 03, 2016
    Uh oh...no, that was too easy. Something bad coming, isn't there? Poor Hermione. Fight girl, fight!
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  • From ANON - Mitch on January 02, 2016
    Where's poor Samuel?
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  • From ANON - Mady on January 02, 2016
    This is for Chapter 4. Well, it is a bit gross how degrading Hermione is. I don't like how "weak" Hermione seems. She can't even fight back against Draco. Regardless of the collar and him having a wand but her not having one, it is a bit disappointing she is acting like this. She is not docile or completely obedient, but she doesn't seem to have much fire left in her. Lol, I agree with another reviewer that Blaise is a slut. I also liked how you explained why Hermione got first place. Draco is starting to realize he needs her alive, but he doesn't care for her yet. The scene where Draco stared at her body seems like the beginning of him falling into this downward spiral in this bout to keep her. He doesn't seem possessive of her yet, but I feel it will change soon. Great job though.
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  • From ANON - angel_baby_10 on January 02, 2016
    Well...Draco is a bastard; he is an evil little cockroach.
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  • From ANON - Mady on January 02, 2016
    This is for Chapter 3. The site has been wonky that it took AGES to load on my laptop. Anyway I feel like you have done a good job describing an angry and violent Draco. You have given us the logic behind his hating her. I don't think it will get better anytime but I will be here for the ride.
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