Reviews for Children of the Sun

BY : Lomonaaeren

  • From Jabsher12 on March 11, 2018

    Things are really starting to move! I look forward to the next chapter :)

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  • From Jan on February 20, 2018

    It's nice seeing Harry getting the help he needs, I can't wait to see Dumbledore's reaction to the investigation and all, please update chapter 16 soon.

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  • From silentxxdreamer on February 07, 2018


    Underestimate Harry xD

    Doo itttt

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  • From Jabsher12 on February 06, 2018

    Awesome chapter! The plot is really growing!! 

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  • From moodysavage on February 05, 2018

    It's funny. The Malfoys only see helpful Hufflepuff Harry. They might help him get rid of all the horcruxes because they are helping  their future 'puppet.' Won't they be surprised :)

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  • From moodysavage on January 29, 2018

    Lol Harry is quite a little steamroller. 

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  • From Jabsher12 on January 29, 2018

    Thanks for the quick update! I love how original this story is

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  • From Jan on January 25, 2018

    That's t Severus, don't blindly trust the headmaster! Pleas update chapter 13 soon.

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  • From Jabsher12 on January 21, 2018

    Awesome update!! This story is getting so interesting. I really like Harry's characterization in this - it's very different from any others I've ever read. Can't wait to read more! 

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  • From Jabsher12 on December 19, 2017

    Hope you can update this one soon!!

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  • From staar on December 04, 2017

    hope he does not do anything to Hermione cause Harry will have a fit.....thanks for the update !!!!! yeap like you said don't like Narissa she's not that good...hope Harry changes her...and what is up with Dubbledork not wanting to help ( but that is what he does)!!

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  • From Boudreaux on November 22, 2017

    I absolutely love where you have been going with this story so far, and I am hoping that the word complete on the description is some sort of mistake.  There is so much more I want to see from this story.  Please continue it as soon as you are able.  The characters are all changed, but yet you have kept them as true to the original work in terms of personality as possible.  This is truly a fascinating work.  Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

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  • From Jan on November 20, 2017

    Hmm, I see, convert Narcissa into Harry's ways, it sounds very intriguing. Please update chapter 10 soon.

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  • From Jan on November 14, 2017

    That's fine, if Narcissa's gonna be a manipulative bi...... witch then the greater the pleasure will be when she's under great torturous pain! 😈muahahahahaha 

    Please update chapter 9 soon.

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  • From Jan on November 08, 2017

    It seems like I'm really not gonna like this Narcissa. I hope Harry doesn't fall for her motherly facade, please update chapter 8 soon.

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