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Reviews for Snape's Apprentices

By : Lalani
  • From Fox on January 16, 2017

    Lalani, 

    Thank you for the update.  This took you absolutely forever. I  was checking on it occasionally, I do hope you are well. 

    Nice chapter, feels like the beginning of the rest of their life. Really nice. 

    Waiting for more. 

    Fox xx 

     


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  • From Imperatina on January 04, 2017

    Lalani, I've very much enjoyed this story and hope you will continue with it.  Looking forward to seeing more chapters.


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  • From Fox on October 25, 2016

    Chapter 18.

    I really liked this chapter, BUT the story is not really finished, is it?

    I do hope you will come back and continue :-)

    Thank you for all the fun

    Fox xx


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  • From Fox on October 24, 2016

    Chapters 16-17.

    Ha! Albus got a slap. Good. 

    Very sexy chapters, lots of great sex -Snape is still a monster in bed... ... oh well, some women are lucky.

    Glad Draco spoke to his sister, it's good they have each other, but he really needs to get Ron out of her head. Ron is just not good enough... especially not your Ron.

    Thanks

    Fox xx


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  • From Fox on October 24, 2016

    Hello again :-)

    Chapters 13-15. So I was right :) but I'm surpriced to find out who was behind it...

    I always thought, Headmaster was a cunning, meddling and secretive old man, but in your story he's also unfair bastard, who would stop at nothing to get, what he wants. Tut, tut. Bad, bad Headmaster. I guess that makes things more interesting ;-)  I do hope he gets what he deserves in the end.

    Thanks

    Fox xx


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  • From ANON - SuperPsychoNutcase on September 29, 2016

    This story intrigues me. I look foward to seeing more. :3


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  • From Fox on September 26, 2016

    Chapters 10-12.

    These three chapters were very hot, very sexy and extremely arousing (although Snape seems to be hard non stop -a lovely thought, but hardly believable), shame Draco and Lucius came over so early...

    It's absolutely lovely to see friendship between Hermione and Draco, I like the fact, they became so close, even though everyone else thinks badly of him. It seems, she is closer to him, than to others (Harry, Ron and Ginny)...curious.

    Fox


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  • From Fox on September 26, 2016

    Chapter 9.

    Nice bath ;-) 

    And Draco thing. Well, let me just say, that I feel sorry for "your" Lucius for having to endure all this marriage of his...shame, really. Poor Draco too, not knowing his own sister (half sister) 

    Fox xx


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  • From Fox on September 26, 2016

    Sex was hot ;-)

    Well, if Snape is going to get hard again so fast, Hernione won't be able to walk in few hours...and he must be one "lean, mean, Slytherin, sex machine" yum!

    Fox xx


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  • From Fox on September 26, 2016

    Chapter 7.

    Traditional apprenticeship...well isn't that just deliciously perverted? Hahahaha  And how come, that nosy Ministry must know all details...

    Thanks 

    Fox xx


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  • From Fox on September 23, 2016

    The end of the chapter is very mysterious. Who is the woman? And man/ghost/spirit thing??...

    Just don't tell me it's Voldie...very mysterious indeed. The story is very good and very original.

    Fox xx


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  • From Fox on September 23, 2016

    Naughty Severus! OMG they are so worth each other...

    Very sexy chapter...

    Fox xx


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  • From Fox on September 23, 2016

    Nauhty little Hermione!

    I, OF COURSE CAN'T BLAME HER FOR HER FANTASIES...

    Can't wait to find out what's next ;-) I have a feeling it will be even hotter...

    Fox xx


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  • From Fox on September 23, 2016

    Ohhh, Harry is a total moron in your story...and seems, that he's quite spoiled by his parents, allowed to behave like an idiot put others in danger and not be punished, so like his father.

    Hermione is in trouble, that's a very intriguing occurence...

    I like a good mystery :-)

    Thanks 

    Fox xx


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  • From Fox on September 23, 2016

    Very interesting beginning. It's very funny to see the events completely different, than canon. I like it. James Potter is the right prat as well, I suppose that's the only canon thing there, hahaha. 

    Fox


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