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  • From ANON - Raz394 on September 17, 2016

    Please continue this, Please.


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  • From ANON - on July 31, 2016

    he cant get her pregnant because of the contraception potion hermione took?? 

    He suddenly had the wild thought of his come catching and her getting pregnant. He felt a second orgasm tear through him, even more powerful than the first. He took his time rolling off of her, rather burying his face in her wild hair and grinding down on her, enjoying her occasional twitches when he stimulated her clit and her hoarse moans. He would not think about his stupid thoughts just now. There was no way he would ever risk her getting pregnant.

    Fuck, he thought desperately. At thinking about her getting pregnant his cock had given a slight twitch, liking the though. Thank god it had been a rather tired one. He was truly fucked out.


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  • From ANON - on July 31, 2016

    OH MY GOD LAVENDE BROWN AND DRACO MALFOY ARE TOGETHER AS BOY FRIEND AND GIRL FRIEND AND THEY ARE RELATED??? HALF BROTHER AND HALF SISTER ?? HOLY SHIT!!! POOR DRACO !!!!!!!!!!!!! 


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  • From ANON - on July 31, 2016

    and after the week then can still fuck anyway !!!!!!!!!!!! 


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  • From ANON - on July 31, 2016

    It had been a week since he had given her the abortion Potion and saw her go though that. It had been terribly painful for her. If he was honest, he had been bad for him too, to see her lying on his bed, writhing in pain. He had not dared to give her any pain potions, afraid they might react with her pregnancy potion and their lingering ingredients.

     

    GPOV

    The room was dark, an abandoned potions classroom, like so many in the castle. The woman stood at a desk, silently cleaning the workplace. She was sure the Potion had been done correctly and soon they would see the fruits of their hard labour. She had taken it herself, going through the pains of having a fake pregnancy and later a fake abortion. She had given her a vial from the same batch.

    When she heard a noise behind her, she hastily turned around, calming down when she saw the shimmery body of her accomplice.

    “I gave her the Potion yesterday, at full moon, like you said.” she said to him in an excited voice, moving closer to the figure. He was getting better. At first he had been only in her head, now he could take on a corporal appearance, sometimes showing his handsome face and a shock of deep, black hair. Today, he barely had a human shape, looking more like a cylinder of shimmery silver smoke. She wanted him to have a body so badly. She needed him by her side. His obsession with the girl galled her immensely. She would be the only one for him, to serve him.

    “But why does it have to be her? Why can´t I do this for you?” she asked him, voicing her thoughts.

    The figure moved slightly, when she suddenly felt incredible pain exploding in her head. She didn't need the words to know that he was displeased with her. She doubled over from the pain, finally falling down to the floor and rolling up into a fetal position.

    It took her nearly two hours of lying there, going through the pain, before being able to stand up and finish her cleaning. It would not do to leave any evidence behind.

    since hermione drunk the potion to get ''miscarry'' the fake baby, will they try again and since hermione and severus are going to have sex that would be the perfect time to try it as they hermione and severus will think their contraction potion failed 

     

    “I will figure something out. But since this is out of the way, we can continue with the rest of our weekend. Here, drink this.” He said, pulling out the contraception Potion out of his pocket and giving it to her.

    By the look in her eyes, she knew exactly what this potion was. He wondered briefly how she knew this, but discarded the thought quickly. She opened the vial carefully and drank it down. She licked her lips when she finished, making his pulse jump.

    He took the vial, put in on the side table and apparated them to the bedroom upstairs.

     


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  • From ANON - on July 30, 2016

    why didnt he tell her this though? 

    He did not want her to have any false impressions about their time together or her apprenticeship. He was not interested in a serious relationship, 


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  • From ANON - on July 30, 2016

    paying with her BODY??? she isnt a WHORE !!!!!!!!!!!!  :-@ HOW DARE HE??? 

    “If we had been at Hogwarts, you would have been taking over lessons for me. Here, Miss Granger, you will have a traditional apprenticeship. You will be paying with your body.” He answered, while shifting his still erect cock under her crotch.

    Her breathing hitched and she stared at him with big, round eyes, obviously surprised, but still answering with a slight grinding of her own. She was a passionate witch and he could barely wait to get her upstairs and naked.

    “My body?” she asked with a small sigh, as if it was the very thing she had wished for. Which she probably had, if he really thought about it.

    “With your body, Miss Granger. Which, in more detailed terms means that you might have your own rooms, but you will be sharing my bed every time I wish for it. I will have access to your body every time I want and you will neither date nor sleep with anyone else during that period. You do not have to do everything I demand of you, if you only want traditional intercourse that is within your rights. If you do not want this or want to date someone else, you can always do so, but then you will have to pay, the same way Draco does. The apprenticeships will have to be registered at the ministry, be clear about that. We have to register the payment and the amount. Which means that everyone will know what is going on.”

     


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  • From ANON - on July 30, 2016

    so does that mean that others wont see those pregnacy symptoms while she WILL see them and WILL feel them?? “I am suspecting that someone has played a cruel joke on you Miss Granger. If you are truly still a virgin and you haven´t been date raped, that is. There is a potion that, when ingested, causes what is usually termed pseudocyesis, or ‘false pregnancy'.  Your body thinks it is pregnant, you start having pregnancy symptoms: your belly will grow and your breasts will start producing milk. It is a very complicated potion, which works, mostly, on your psyche. It is your brain that thinks you are pregnant and starts producing the necessary pregnancy hormones.” He paused for a moment, thinking of something. “Of course, we could check by going for an ultrasound the muggle way or use a spell, but since you are not showing and only three days ago handled some very dangerous ingredients without getting any cramps or starting any bleeding, I think you might have been slipped the potion quite recently. Which means, we would see nothing in an ultrasound one way or another yet.” He held up the purple vial in his hand and showed it to her. “This is a vial of the Angel's Trumpet Draught.”

     “That is a poison!” Miss Granger interrupted him, which made him scowl and Miss Granger cower in her chair. Privately, though, he was impressed that she knew what the Draught actually was.

     


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  • From ANON - on July 30, 2016

    not a severus and hermione story ??? so hermione was date raped and is pregnant but with who baby daddy? not severus obviously? 


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  • From ANON - on July 30, 2016

    Who is in severus office?? Hermione??

     

    Normally his office would not have been this heavily warded this badly with him inside, but he had gotten an unexpected visit. He did not want any of the other teachers walking in on their conversation, so he had raised all of his wards.

    He had quickly looked at his companion, basically picked her up and threw her into his private chambers. He told her that the Headmaster was at his door and not to make a sound, use magic or touch anything in there, because of his dark magic artefacts. They both knew what everyone would assume if they found her in his private office.

    He closed the door, raised the wards leading into his private chambers and sat down at his desk, facing the door. He casually flicked his wand, letting the wards down. He didn't want the Headmaster to destroy the wards, they took time to create.

    SEVERUS FUCKED LILY POTTER??? WHEN ?

     

    Lily was, as always, beautifully put together, her red hair shining in the dim light and her green eyes sparkling out of her stunning face. Snape unwillingly remembered the last time he had seen that shiny hair, clutched in his fists as he was riding her from behind. He could feel his cock swell up. And then he remembered how she sounded like a squeaky children's toy when being rammed full of cock.


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  • From SnapesOnlyOne on March 10, 2016
    Love it! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - M on March 10, 2016
    Hey there, great story. I would like to offer to beta read for you, if you are still looking. Drop me an email if you would like me to.
    -M
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  • From ANON - lovey_reader on March 10, 2016
    Oh I am intrigued....what's in his house? I can't wait to Draco to tell lavender. I'm excited for their return to Hogwarts and how they're going to continue. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From BBWulf on March 09, 2016
    Never understood how Severus could be even remotely attractive. You think you could explain that to me please, as it seems he is quite popular.
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  • From ANON - MzPearlz on February 22, 2016
    Definitely let the slutty side that the highway! :3
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