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Reviews for Because We Are Snakes

By : Setsuna24
  • From ANON - Linaceae on February 22, 2016
    Wow...! What a chapter! :D I liked that everything wasn't dragged eternally, yet so many things happened in just one chapter to poor Harry. This year would have been hard enough without paranoia and the constant hunger. I dearly hope the strain he puts on his body plus the blood quill (I don't know if Umbrage started using it yet) won't be detrimental to the hatchling's health...

    Initially I thought Harry woke up in Snape's quarters and I was really happy, firstly because Snape is one of my favourite character, and secondly because it meant Harry wouldn't be alone when in labour (even if his instincts insist on it). But it seems more like he unconsciously found abandoned rooms? I can't see if what he finds every time he goes there are exclusively items he gathered, or if some of them are brought by Snape? In short, is Snape aware of Harry's change and pregnancy? Maybe you already have answered this in the next chapters, I'll have to see :D

    And of course: the Twins! It is a bit easy to make them Harry's allies, and they often are in Dark!Harry or manipulative!Dumbledore fics, but they are just too lovable :d
    They also have this mischievous streak which can be turned into a darker, creepier or more sadistic trait. On top of that, they definitely are resourceful and geniuses in their own way. There are so many things one can do with characters like this, I am impatient to see what kind of role they will play in the future ;)
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  • From ANON - Linaceae on February 22, 2016
    Poor Harry, I know the pain of trying to go back to sleep (or just going to sleep) when in the same room as someone who snores like a pig..! (and again with the food :D)

    I wonder how long his gestation will be? I made some research and it differs from one serpent to the other... I think between 6-7 months was the most common period. However, if we take into consideration that Harry is half Basilisk, the gestation period could be up to one year, maybe more (as with elephants)! It also depends if the Basilisk is oviparous (lays eggs then sit on them), but I am pretty sure it is the case. So from 5 to 8 months inside the body, then up to 3 months in a nice little nest.

    I hope Harry will be kidnapped by this time otherwise it is not going to be pretty. He is already showing signs of being in the protective/killing mother setting, I don't want to imagine what it will be if he cannot have unlimited access to his egg because of classes >:)
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  • From ANON - Linaceae on February 21, 2016
    Dumbledore. What a bastard. All those lives... I hate him >:(

    I can't wait to read about Voldemort discovering about the egg..! :D
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  • From ANON - Linaceae on February 21, 2016
    I just reread my review of chapter 3..! What I meant to write was: to use it as a way to further oneself into society is something I can totally conceive /slytherins to do/. Wow, can't believe I forgot this part, it made me sound so cold, like some kind of stuck up - *cough cough*. You see my point. :S
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  • From ANON - Linaceae on February 21, 2016
    You described Harry's hunger for meat so well I found myself salivating when you talked about Dudley XD I have this slight guilt that is also present when I read a particularly well written Hannibal fanficiton: I know what Hannibal does is bad, I know he is cooking human, but gosh does it sound delicious! :S

    Poor Harry sounded so miserable, I so wanted to give him roasted beef (or raw beef more like). I thought about skinning the Dursleys for him, but really, who would want to have some Vernon in their mouth? Ew...

    In any case, I want them to suffer. I know Voldemort will make me proud. They endangered his heir after all -even if I don't know how you will make him react to the news that he is a parent, one does not touch his child-.

    Oh ho, what do I see, is it possible for our snarky professor to have some important role in the future? As some kind of friend/sarcastic-minion-of-my-husband-I-like-to-exchange-snide-remarks-with even? I can't wait to see :D

    I bet he keeps the fur for his nest. It will be all fluffy and comfortable :)

    I hope Voldemort will provide him a large and fertile part of his land so Harry can grow a beautiful garden with nice fruit trees and gorgeous roses :)

    The moment in the bath was really touching. Like he sung a lullaby for his little one... Loved it :)

    Sorry it is so disjointed, I wrote at the same time I read in order not to forget anything. To chapter 5 for me :D Yay!
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  • From ANON - Linaceae on February 21, 2016
    I liked your thoughts about Tom and how he views sex. Indeed, to use it as a way to further oneself into society is something I can totally conceive.

    I loved this chapter and the lovely plot you began to plant with Hermione. I see that you have updated quite a lot, I feel so lucky :D I'm too impatient to read to really leave an interesting review, sorry. :S I'll try to do better with the next chapters! :)
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  • From Jan on February 20, 2016
    Lol, I'll try and be a little more patient 😁 I did enjoy this chapter with Harry and Draco, though I would of loved it even more if Draco really had wet his pants 😈 This is me patiently awaiting for chapter 9😊
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  • From ANON - Anaelyssa on February 18, 2016
    I am greatly enjoying your story. I was a bit doubtful at first, but the quality hasn't fallen and you update quite often. Definitely not the same as many other mpreg stories. I can't imagine your Harry going shopping for lots of baby things.
    Ha! That showed Malfoy!
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  • From ANON - Lilalu on February 18, 2016
    I love your story! I once saw a similar concept of Harry having been changed to a snake-like creature due to the Basilisk venom and thought it was an interesting idea. Yours is so much more unique though and I love it! I am excited to see what happens when Harry realizes what's up with him and what old Voldy will do after suddenly becoming a Dad (imagine his face - hahaha!). Awesome - thanks for the regular updates! :)
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  • From Jan on February 16, 2016
    Oh I can't wait for the egg to get here 😁, what about Voldy? Is he going to find out about the egg soon, or later on? Please update chapter 8 and more soon.
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  • From ANON - TheRogueGirl on February 15, 2016
    this story seems very interesting. I usually do not follow stories on this website but I feel this one might be worth following. I hope there is much more to come
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  • From ANON - Leveen on February 15, 2016
    You're doing more than all right! It is really good.
    And you're very quick with updates. I just found this story yesterday and today there is already a new chapter! Thank you! It's great!
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  • From Noriko on February 14, 2016
    New chapterz! :D
    I really like your story, please, oh please keep writing it! Your update frequency is awesome btw.
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  • From ANON - Leveen on February 14, 2016
    It's different from what I'm used to. But I like it very much. How often do you update? Lots of love
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  • From Jan on February 08, 2016
    It's good to see that he's like that, though I hope that he'll find that one special person that he'll be able to trust completely, please update chapter 5, can't wait to see how he's going to react when he finds out that he's pregnant 😄
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