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From Persy on October 20, 2021
Yes indeed, your writing is most excellent! Love the details..and the HEAT!!!!!

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From Lissa on March 21, 2017
This story has been my favorite of yours thus far. It is beautifuly done to the point I wonder what you do for a living. It was intesley accurate. The character development perfect. Snape was astoundingly astute and gentle while holding on to his snarky rigidity that has led so many people to love him profoundly. The growth of both him and Hermione was satisfying to say the least.

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From Fox on January 14, 2017
DS!
I really thought it was Snape!
Hypno-the-rapist woman is getting on my nerves! I know that the story is already complete, but can you write in someone slapping her? Please! It would make my day... Bitch... massage therapy...
Fox xx

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From Fox on January 14, 2017
Chapter 2.
It seem it will be a difficult fight. Snape is too intelligent to just give in. He won't give up his secrets too easily, I wonder what will he want in return. A mutual therapy, perhaps? This Snape is unnerving.
And this hypnotherapist should be reprimanded for callind Dr Granger a stupid girl!
Fox xx

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From Fox on January 14, 2017
DS,
Chapter 1.
Just started this. It was going all fine, without any hiccups until this came up:
“Yes . . . er . . . Mr Quidditch . . .” His deep, familiar tone was as dry as parchment. “I was of the understanding that we were simply on a day trip to the Museum of Abominations. Am I to assume that we were misinformed? Or is this, in fact, the aforementioned location, whereupon the abominations in question are a gaggle of former Hogwarts students masquerading as professionals?”
Oh fuck! Hahahahaha what a glorious was to end the chapter!
Fox xx

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From deedeebug on July 04, 2016
Thaank you for sharing, great story!

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From ANON - on July 01, 2016
WAIT A MINUTE EMILY IS LUNA LOVEWOOD??
“What are you fucking doing!” she growled, drawing her hand back and hitting him as hard as she could across the face.
He didn’t respond, simply staring at her, his pale cheek blooming red.
“Answer me!” She drew her hand back again.
“Stop. Don’t!” Emily wheezed.
Hermione turned to see tears trickling down the chaotic rivulets of her cheeks.
“He’s been helping me.”
“Yeah, he’s good at that,” Hermione sneered.
“I’m sorry. I should have told you before,” the woman sobbed.
“Fuck,” Hermione hissed, putting her hands on her hips and staring at the ground.
“It’s me, Hermione. It’s Luna.”
Hermione’s head snapped up.
“I'm Luna Lovegood.”

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From ANON - on July 01, 2016
does Mr Mollison have a crush (an obsession etc on) a young child? is he a pedophile and thats why he feels so gulity for he actions??
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From ANON - on July 01, 2016
why did she automatically think obsession after he said it was more than just a crush? thats unfair, i mean it could be love? why judge so quickly and think obsession straight away??
Hermione frowned inwardly. An oblique admission.
“Why wouldn’t they have known?”
“Because I didn’t tell them.”
“A crush?”
“Sort of. Probably more than that.”
An obsession. But she didn’t want a word like that out in the open just yet.

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From ANON - on July 01, 2016
shouldnt they use silenting spells i mean if hermione is going to be vocal during sex with snape??
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From ANON - on July 01, 2016
snape is doing hermione job for hermione with his sex therepy on sarah !!!!!!!!
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From ANON - on July 01, 2016
when why is SNAPE there as a patient for sex therapy ?? why is hermione the doctor and NOT snape the doctor?? “Because I’m not like you.”
“What?” Hermione almost choked, taking a step toward him.
“I have a wealth of sexual experience to draw from,” he said.
“And how do you know I don’t?” Hermione could feel the flush rolling across her skin like a fever.
“You sent Calder and Jaeger away. You didn’t understand them. You might be sympathetic toward your clients but you can’t be empathetic. Not completely. Because you have absolutely no idea what it feels like to be them.”

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From ANON - on July 01, 2016
since when is SNAPE a sex therapist to know what Sarah needed???
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From ANON - on July 01, 2016
since when is SNAPE a sex therapist to know what Sarah needed???
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From ANON - on July 01, 2016
what happened to patient/doctory confitentiality? i mean they way they talk about other patients with other patients and with other doctors is SHOCKING!!!!!!!!!!!! and NEEDS to STOP NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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