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Reviews for A Different Kind of Hero

By : JunjouSlashGirl
  • From ANON - juli on September 05, 2016

    I love your story so far. However I hope the question you asked at the end of a 4some was about a different story becuase it does not fit at all to have voldemort be in their relationship based on how you written his character.. and i though draco was dead?   however i would not be apposed to the pairing in a different story =)


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  • From ANON - moodysavage on September 05, 2016

    Lucius was bound to the house not Harry Potter. Taking Lucius out of the blood wards of the house should allow Lucius to escape and do whatever he wants. If he was bound to Harry then the same should be for Nagini and she should feel the same pull as Lucius. It doesn't make sense. Harry should have went to the store alone. (chap1)


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  • From JuliaOS13 on June 20, 2016
    A somewhat constructive criticism first, there are quite a number of spelling and grammar mistakes that at times make its difficult to understand what is being said. Also there are a couple of points such as sirius and remus being referred to as harry's guardians or sirius referring to harry as his nephew which are not explained. That being said I love the plot and the feel of the story, I think that the characters fit and that the general tone of the story makes sense, I look forward to reading more!!!!!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on June 20, 2016
    Dumbledore is so lucky that Harry is such a forgiving person. After the horrible childhood he had, to find that Dumbledore made him actually believe he was older than his age. Hopefully this won't change Lucius' opinion of him. Honestly, if I was Lucius, I would feel sick knowing that my mate was a twelve year old. Poor man! Fabulous new chapter! Thank you for this incredible story! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
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  • From wolfcathope on June 20, 2016
    Wow how is lucius going to handle that he mated a 12 year old? Snape and harry are going to love the look on his face though when instead of harry marrying up malfoy did. I wonder how Black is going handle this but this will help with Voldemort though. love the story
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  • From Chyna on June 14, 2016
    OMG I just found this story and I am loving it!! You are doing such an amazing job. Can't wait to read more :)
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  • From lizkrohn on May 22, 2016
    When will you update?
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  • From staar on May 01, 2016
    What I thought the reading was going to be was not but man so I like it !!!!! can't wait for more !!!!!!!really good
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  • From ANON - Kakashi on April 29, 2016
    Nice chapter! I really like it that your chapters are long! Please keep up your great work.
    I'm wondering, will Harry be Severus' biological son? I'm wondering what James did to repay him back. And the only thing that I can think about is to "protect" Severus son.
    And the next question is...shouldn't Remus sense that something is wrong with Harry? Werewolves Can much better smell than any human and they are the only and real
    Enemy of vampires. So he should be able to sense that something is wrong with Harry right?
    And my last question is, I thought that Harry's body temperature sank really low, so he should be really cold. Doesn't hermione feel it when she hugged Harry?
    Okay that is all I have to say about chapter 8. I hope you will update soon and we will read some Lucius/ Harry moments and also some Harry/Severus father/son moments.
    Keep up your work!
    Love
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  • From ANON - autumngold on April 29, 2016
    Excellent new chapter! Poor Harry, Hermione and Ron are very noisy and never give Harry any space. They also try not to let him keep any secrets. Thank goodness he has Lucius to keep him safe and happy. I just hope that he still will be able to smell Lucius on his shirt after he cried on it. Hopefully soon Harry and Lucius will be together again. Thank you for your outstanding new chapter! Can't wait for Lucius and Harry to be together again!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on April 25, 2016
    please please add more soon i cant wait too read more and i cheak everyday too see if has more....
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  • From ANON - autumngold on April 22, 2016
    Thank you for your incredible update! My heart breaks for both Lucius and Harry. Hopefully Lucius has had an easier time with the Dark Lord than his family. Harry needs to stop being so nice to Ginny. She is never going to get the hint that he isn't interested if he keeps being so polite to her. Obviously Ginny won't accept that Harry isn't interested in her, she wants her rich hero. It's too bad that she is too stubborn to accept what everyone is trying to tell her. Fabulous new chapter of your wonderful story! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on April 18, 2016
    wonderful please please add more!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on April 15, 2016
    Outstanding new chapter! Thank you for having Lucius take such good care of Harry. For the first time in his life, Harry is having someone who actually cares for him and puts him first. Hopefully soon Harry will realize who his true friends and family are, and I just hope that Severus will be able to do the same. Wonderful update! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
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  • From ANON - kakashi on April 12, 2016
    I Love your story! Excellent plot. Can pureblood vampires get pregnant? That would be awesome!!!
    Love that Nagini will be on Harry's side. I'm interested how this story will be later Lucius/Harry/Draco because I thought Draco died. So I'm really curious right now! Please update soon!
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