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Reviews for A Different Kind of Hero

By : JunjouSlashGirl
  • From ANON - autumngold on April 09, 2016
    Your story is incredible! Thank you for giving Harry such a strong protector! I'm so glad that Harry will no longer have to die for Dumbledore's "Greater Good". Excellent story! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on April 09, 2016
    more more more!!!!!
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  • From BAFan on April 08, 2016
    Ch. 1

    Interesting idea - I'm intrigued. One quibble:

    //Only now did he realize, that the tips of his hair only reached the aristocrat’s elbows, he was only five feet tall after all, whilst the noble man looked more like 6,4.//

    I know you want to emphasize the difference in their heights, but this doesn't seem right. If the tips of Harry's hair - which from canon descriptions sticks up at least an inch high on his head - only reaches Lucius's elbow, either Harry is much less than 5' tall or Lucius is considerably taller than 6'4". That's a difference of sixteen inches, which measured upward from Lucius's elbows would be maybe mouth-high on him, leaving about six inches to reach the top of his head. Granted, I'm measuring on myself with only a ruler so these are rough estimations, but still your description doesn't make sense to me. Lucius is not a giant and Harry, although small for his age, isn't that short.

    Another quibble, this one regarding the tether that Harry tied between them when they went to bed. There was no magic involved in it, so what was to stop Lucius from untying it while Harry slept? You have an interesting idea here, as I said, but the story could really benefit by having a beta. There are several errors, including Private Drive instead of Privet and relieve instead of relief, among others. Also, long paragraphs are difficult to read, especially during conversations where more than one person is speaking. My comments are intended as constructive criticism intended to help you, so I hope I haven't given offense.

    ~Debbie
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on April 07, 2016
    please add more soon :)
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  • From ANON - AnonymousTigress on April 05, 2016
    NICE. I like. Original idea. It's definitely keeping my interest. Can't wait to read more.
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