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Reviews for Duel Enrollment

By : Blackkitten23
  • From ladyedgecombe on September 11, 2017

    Brilliant


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  • From Jan on September 07, 2017

    Oh, hell no! How did a Hogwarts letter got to Julian? I thought they wouldn't find him since he's no longer Harry Potter? Please update chapter 12 soon.


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  • From phoenix-rob on August 09, 2017

    How dare Dumbledore dictate Severus' personal life. What a manipulative bastard.

    Can't wait to see how Julian managed to get two letters - like he said it shouldn't be possible.


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on July 04, 2017

    Ch 10.  Julian is such a sweetie.  Hopefully Draco can rise above his upbringing and negativity


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on July 04, 2017

    Glad the Malfoy's have an open mind


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  • From Jan on July 01, 2017

    It's nice to see the Malfoy's a little more open minded, especially little Draco. So young and innocent, yet you could already see that his parents influence was starting to show. Can't wait to see what'll happen next, please update chapter 11 soon.


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  • From Luthistar on June 29, 2017

    Lovely!!! I like it a lot!!!


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  • From Luthistar on May 12, 2017

    Great chapter!!!!  I loved it!! 


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  • From SickPuppy on May 11, 2017

    I like this as a concept and would like to see how it progresses. Just, please stick to one tense! It's incredibly difficult to follow at times, so rather than enjoying the story and getting swept away by the narrative, I'm having to work out what you mean. (Oh, and FYI "due to" means "because of", so the twins have streaks due to an accident; not "do to" an accident).

    Loved some lines in this: "Nugget King of the Hippogriffs" (I so wish Harry had chosen that as his name!) and "six generations of Malfoys just rolled in their graves" (made me smile as I was imagining poor Lucius shaking his head in total disbelief). SP


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on May 11, 2017

    Ch 9  Really enjoying it so far.  Can't wait for Draco and Julian to meet.  Lucius has a lot to learn.  Ack for the cliffy!!


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on April 27, 2017

    Sounds like a cool familiar to have.


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on April 27, 2017

    aww for Severus having a date with the twins.  Can't wait for DumDore to go down.


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on April 27, 2017

    ch 6  Loving your Severus and Brian too.


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on April 27, 2017

    ch 5: I'm already loving Severus. Can;t wait for the goblins to help Julian get revenge.


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on April 27, 2017

    LOVE the crocodile addition.


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