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By : Alcoholic_Rootbeer
  • From ANON - SofiaCantata on January 20, 2017

    I love this story! I check in all the time for updates. This is honestly something I have never seen before. I am beyond intrigued. The last few chapters seemed drawn out, but I trust your process. Good luck with the dramione awards. 


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  • From ANON - on January 19, 2017

    I've skipped the past few chapters and only read the last few lines. I feel like you're trying to delay the progress of the story. I really don't mean to offend you but it's a chore to read it now, so I wish you well and won't be returning to finish the fic. Good luck in the awards and with your other projects


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  • From ANON - anon on January 19, 2017
    sorry about the box question. i just read a lot about different occult traditions and the jewish one about the dybbuk has always stood out to me. just like the one about golems. the twist on it being a book was pretty original. looking forward to learning who the dybbuk is. im leaning toward a certain female but i suspect that you will surprise me. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - anon on January 17, 2017
    just wondering if the box has come into play yet. or if i missed it somewhere. dybbuks usually have one. maybe hermione could explain where it is and how she found out about it.
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  • From MotekElm on January 16, 2017

    I love this story. Can't wait for more. Good luck with the Dramione awards


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  • From ANON - on January 10, 2017

    "Caring about someone who only wants my best interests at heart, and visa versa."

    It's 'vice versa', not 'visa versa'. I'm finding more and more mistakes as I continue to read your story. You also said 'till it reached the back', but 'till' means a cash register. I think you mean 'until', or if you want to shorten it: 'till. 


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  • From ANON - on January 10, 2017

    Boring chapter, but I hope it gets better agaibn soon


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  • From ANON - on January 04, 2017

    It really bugs me when the definition of insanity cliche is used by an author I like. Not only was Albert Einstein incorrect in his definition of insanity, some people still throw it around like it's common knowledge and a widely accepted definition. It's not. The Draco and Hermione in this story would know that. You should know that. 


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  • From ANON - Alex on January 04, 2017

    It's get better and better.....


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  • From ANON - Ice Empress on January 02, 2017

    I adore this fabulous look into a dark and tainted Draco, who is infected with a curse; a Hermione who doesn't exactly flee from the darkness like she should, but instead rises to that challenge and tries to smother the darkness with her own corrupted light. I love the insightful viewpoints into Draco's mind. I do wish he would get a crack at Ronald though. I can't wait to see how Hermione keeps Draco's impulses under control considering he could easily kill her while they tryst. I can't wait for the next installment. 


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  • From MotekElm on December 30, 2016

    It just keeps getting better. I love it


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  • From ANON - Sean Wright on December 30, 2016

    Now that was unexpected.


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  • From ANON - Rai on December 30, 2016

    Your story is amazing! Can't wait too see what's next.


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  • From ANON - Alex on December 30, 2016

    One of my favourite fanfiction on this side. Can't wait Tom read more.... 

    Happy new year!


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  • From MotekElm on December 28, 2016

    It's so good. I'm glad I went against my better judgement and decided to read despite the warnings. I normally don't like horror, but this is too good. It's drama and angst and romance with a little horror


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