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Reviews for Say My Name

By : Thunderbird
  • From Dedicated_Reader on February 18, 2017

    As you said, the tension had to snap at some point! Beautifully done, and still plenty of places to go.  I can't wait!


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  • From djaddict on February 18, 2017

    Well, that was a nice surprise! Maybe Harry should just announce he is gay and then the girls will stop, lol.


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  • From ARFleets on February 17, 2017

    OH MY GOD! Fantastic, look forward to any awkward that comes up next chapter - I imagine at least one of them is going to overthink everything...


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  • From Dedicated_Reader on February 08, 2017

    Damn, I love a good, slow burn. Neither really saying how attracted they are to each other, and yet their passion towards each other is burning through their volleys! I wonder if Ron is going to pull his head out of his ass, and if he does, will it wind back up there when Harry's feelings for Draco become obvious? Until next time, my dear!


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  • From djaddict on February 08, 2017

    Really enjoyed this chapter. I am really glad Harry didn't let Ron walk all over him and just take the blame. I am not really a fan of Ron or Ginny because I think they are not true friends.

    Love the Draco interaction 


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  • From Dedicated_Reader on February 03, 2017

    Success! Another chapter perfectly executed. The banter between Harry and Draco gave me tingles, keep it coming, lol. I've always wondered how much Ginny really loved Harry and how much was just her fangirl-ing. I'm excited to see the next chapter! 


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  • From djaddict on February 03, 2017

    WhooHoo! Thanks for the breakup. :) lol

    One of the better breakup scenes I have read


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  • From Toddy on February 01, 2017

    Thought provoking.  I have read many descriptions of the reason Harry and Ginny parted, yours is one of the best - so far.


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  • From Fnanon on January 31, 2017

    Loving the story so far, personally i don't mind the M/F dabblings of these early chapters given my personal leanings in regards to sexuality, but i can't wait until Harry gets to shut Dracos snarky mouth up with his tongue, or maybe something else... ;3


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  • From djaddict on January 30, 2017

    Ugh! Ginny kisses!  Lol  There should be a warning for that sort of thing. *kidding*


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  • From Dedicated_Reader on January 27, 2017

    Oh, this chapter was fun! I found myself smiling through the whole thing. I'd love to be a beta, however I know my grammar skills are such that someone else would have to correct my corrections, lol. I can't wait for chapter three!


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  • From djaddict on January 23, 2017

    Really good and I would definitely read more if your muse led that way!


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  • From Dedicated_Reader on January 23, 2017

    First of all, congratulations on posting your first story! I can't imagine how nerve wracking posting this must have been.

    Secondly, I love this story! It was sexy in a soft way. You weren't vulgar or obscene (although those kinds of stories are wonderful as well, lol) and yet you still made me want more. I hope you decide to write more for this story. Smut scenes are wonderful, but I always enjoy when there's plot with it.

    Lastly, in the name of constructive criticism, there were a few mistakes. However, they did not distract me from reading right on through. My best guess is you just need a beta reader to catch those pesky hiccups, and then your story shall be perfect. I hope to read more of your work soon!


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  • From Fnanon on January 19, 2017

    Wow, this was a really good one-shot; I would totally be down for reading some more of this.


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