Reviews for ...After Happily Ever AfterBy : Lissa & snowblind12 |
I must confess that I usually only give reviews at the end. I know writers enjoy feedback and I'm not very good at it. Although sometimes when the chapter is funny, sad or just well written I will make a comment. Nice to know I'm not the only one that waits til the end.
I think this chapter showing Severus's pain on hearing all of her injuries was harder than reading about her torture. Don't get me wrong, Hermione is the only female lead I read, so yes her torture was very hard to read. Twice as tough to write I'm sure. But you did a very thorough job and it was well written. Snape's response made me cry however. Well done.
Wow. That was extremely difficult to read and it was not with a dry eye. But I imagine it was probably even more difficult to write. Well done.
Hello Lissa and hello Snow!
Do you recognize me? Your first german Fan?
I feel very bad that I didn't wrote you for that long time. I don't know what happens and *boom* the time slipped away. In my life was so much trouble the past year ...
But a few days ago my mobile phone apparated me back to this website. I read the whole story again and now I finished and sitting here bursting in tears because its over.
I love this storyline, your charakter development and the fluff and the crime... everything.
I really thought you two would kill Hermione.
Now I start to read your other stories and I promise I don't wait again over a year to review!
You two are so talented, thats a gift! I feel what the characters feel and after a few words its like I'm part of the story!
Please don't ever stop writing!
Lots of love
LittleStranger
Ok, so I actually started following you after reading your joint story with snow. I was actually the one who recommended the Facebook page. :P I’m more of a lurker than a reviewer, sorry. >.< I just had to comment after finishing chapter 29 of this story. I’ve really enjoyed it so far, but the end of 29 got to me. It was extremely emotional, in a good way, and I actually had to turn away from the story for a minute so I didn’t cry at my desk at work. You have done an amazing job with the story, and although I cannot personally relate to how hermione and Snape are feeling, the emotions you are trying to convey really come across. I love your work and I keep hoping to see more from you! <3
Oh.... My heart.... 😢
This story has made my day!!! I finished it in less than 24 hours. I am truly in love with this!! Keep up the wonderful work.
What, you can't just leave it like this! I'm going crazy. I read this all in 36 hrs and it's one of my favorites so far.
GUYS I CANT EVEN
okay so sorry but I (admittedly) have been a silent reader and a bit petrified to review but I felt like I owed it to you guys to review (i read so many of you guys' fanfics and each one is so compelling and detailed i love it). That being said, I love the growing dynamic between Snape and pregnant Hermonie and I can't wait for the baby! How will already exhausted Hermonie cope with so many more sleepless nights? Will their kid/s ever know about the messed-up history of the kidnapping?
hmmmmm i need more than 2 more chapters lol
GUYS I CANT EVEN
okay so sorry but I (admittedly) have been a silent reader and a bit petrified to review but I felt like I owed it to you guys to review (i read so many of you guys' fanfics and each one is so compelling and detailed i love it). That being said, I love the growing dynamic between Snape and pregnant Hermonie and I can't wait for the baby! How will already exhausted Hermonie cope with so many more sleepless nights? Will their kid/s ever know about the messed-up history of the kidnapping?
hmmmmm i need more than 2 more chapters lol
GUYS I CANT EVEN
okay so sorry but I (admittedly) have been a silent reader and a bit petrified to review but I felt like I owed it to you guys to review (i read so many of you guys' fanfics and each one is so compelling and detailed i love it). That being said, I love the growing dynamic between Snape and pregnant Hermonie and I can't wait for the baby! How will already exhausted Hermonie cope with so many more sleepless nights? Will their kid/s ever know about the messed-up history of the kidnapping?
hmmmmm i need more than 2 more chapters lol
Chapters 22 and 23 brought me to tears, thank you for the warning. Lucius deserves a worse death. Honestly, I would have tied him and stabbed him with that knife until I grew too old to enjoy it.Your a great writer, I'm looking forward to future chapters?
Reviewing Chapters 1-39:
I read these all in one go. I couldn't stop until I was caught up and I'm so excited for the update. I can't wait to read what happens! This story is so well written and timed perfectly! The details are great and I love knowing Lucius met his demise in the end.
Oh my! I just found this story and am in love with it. I love this view of Snape. I've always thought Hermonie fit better with someone other than Ron. I just couldn't imagine him feeling her intellectual needs. Snape would perfectly! Especially your Snape! I cant wait to read more and definitely cant wait to see what happens to Lucius.
I’ve only just found your story and I’ve been hooked! Fabulous writing and completely gripping. I also love that you let us see what you are describing (hair/dresses). I’ll be checking back regularly for updates... please don’t take too long!
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