Reviews for ...After Happily Ever AfterBy : Lissa & snowblind12 |
Oh my, didn't even see that you posted another chapter. Very dark, unsettling, but enjoyable nevertheless. Hopefully Hermione can pull through all the awful things those bastards did to her and still allow herself to be happy with the man she loves.
Loved the new chapter. Poor Severus and Hermione. And I really thought Lucius would change his ugly ways and become a better person. In my story I'm making him a good guy. Or at least as good as Lucius can be :) Waiting to see what happens with our favorite couple in the next chapter.
Oh man getting into some emotional waters. I love it! Haha! Especially love the end of Ch 22 Snape's line about everyone he loves dies. You can feel his complete desolation. Absolutely brilliant.
Holy moly! So well written. Very curious about what happens next. Not just between Hermione and Snape, but with Lizzie as well. I want to see Ron happy, but I love Draco. And...the golden trio might not take to well to her befriending the Slytherin. Loving this story!
Another great chapter! Curious about how Malfoy is going to play into all this. Really love Lizzie!!
Hot, Hot, Hot!!! Loved it!!
Love, love, love Lizzie!! Great character development and I like how you write Hermione's reaction to her. Soo good!
Love the story. Simply beautiful and well thought out. Hope Draco's parents will be accepting of their son's choice. I'd like to see him find his happiness. He deserves it as much as Severus and everyone else. Waiting for the next chapters.
Yeah some awesome xhristmas loving!!, still loving and still here
As soon as his hand dropped to her bum and they were pressed up against each other I just knew that someone was going to see them. They were playing with fire the moment they stepped onto the dance floor it was inevitable really. Looking forward to reading more! xx
New reader here, just wanted to let you know how much I love this story. Very well written, especially the interactions between various characters. I will admit that I am not totally enthralled with the Lizzie lovelife storyline, BUT I do really appreciate that your story has more depth and world-building than simply SS/HG going at it all the time. I almost never read incomplete stories (nothing is more aggravating that getting into a story that is destined to be abandoned), but I'm glad I gave this one a chance!
Congratulations on your brave foray into smuttville. Nice sexy times between our two favourites. Well done. x
Another fantastic chapter! There's so much going on with so many people, it's so exciting! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Hello again! :)
I actually finished chapter 19 and I hope the next update comes soon!
I told you in my earlier review that I'm in love with youre story and your kind of writing and I just can repeat it.
The plot is fascinating and I'm imagine what could happen in the next chapters ^^
I really hope you stay motivated and creativ so that we reader get the chance to read your great story
Greetings! LittleStranger
Hey ~*LissaDream!
I just wanted to say that I love your story sooooo much. Its an incredible joy to read it.
First I thought I would wait until I read the last chapter, to give you a long review, but I cant wait, because your story ist that gorgeous.
Youre type of writing is very good and me, as a reader, can easily take place in your story and 'be a part of it' . I understand the charcaters behavior and can feel their feelings with them.
I hope you stay writing ... oh yes, I have to add that your story has come to Germany :)
Im a german user, who really enjoys your work :D and I hope that excuses mistakes in language or vocabulary which I'll probably make.
Greetings! Little Stranger
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