Reviews for ...After Happily Ever AfterBy : Lissa & snowblind12 |
I'm really enjoying your fluid style. The characerisations are believable and likeable and I love the burgeoning relationship between our two favourites.
“All though watching Ron struggle with a boner all year might be enough to make me vomit.” – bahaha, me too ;)
I loved Snape’s warm welcome. I’d give him a warm welcome too :) And Hermione’s enjoyment of his enjoyment was so sweet.
How long will Snape keep his hands to himself? Looking forward to finding out x
What luck for me that the first story I read here was yours! I was so nervous to read a HP adult fanfic; I worried for nothing! Your writing is spellbinding, the flow is flawless, and there's real emotion here rather than just a bunch of sex! I am truly enjoying watching Snape open up and become more "human". Lizzie is a hoot, but also a "real" character, she's easy to relate to. You keep magical elements in the story rather than just the characters, and it makes it so much more engaging. Also, the Severus/Hermione pairing is one I never had thought of! Great, great, GREAT read! I can't wait to see how this ends up!
Thank you ! Thank you! For this amazing complex story! I love where you have taken everyone and I can't wait to see where they go from here. Snape will lose his mind when Hermione gets taken but I know he'll move heaven and earth to get her back. Keep up the amazing writing:)
No one has ever needed someone to slap some sense into him than Snape in that last chapter!
The more I read the more I wish Lizzie was my friend she is so badass it's unreal. Her standing up to Snape had be bursting out laughing. She is quickly becoming my favourite Puff!
Oh and the quidditch match was just brilliant.
Can't wait to read the rest :)
Hopefully Severus gets his head out of his ass soon. Poor Hermione.
Nooooooooooo!!! I want the snape and hermonie loving!!! Omg hopefully things will turn out ok!!!!
So I read all 15 chapters last night and I love it! I love Lizzie and her puff ways and I'm really hoping that she works things out with Draco but totally kicks his arse on the quidditch pitch! I look forward to reading the next installment :)
My, God I love this story! Just read it all in one go over a day. I'm curious as to how you're going to tie in the prolouge and excited to read more! You're writing style is just my taste. I adore your original character and can't wait to see her story progress. Please, keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you so much for sharing your story with us. 100% amazing.
---DragonsLoveHoney
Came across this and was whisked away on an amazing journey. Love the whole dynamic. Waiting for more!
Still really enjoying this story, can't wait for the next chapter. xxxx
I like this post-war return of all of our faves to Hogwarts. And the introduction of a 'transfer' student into the mix should make for interesting times ahead! You have a nice, flowing style that is engaging to read. Moving onto the next chappie ;) x
Thanks so much for a great story! I love thr relationships and my heart is already breaking for both Draco and Ron. Please don't let anything too terrible happen to your new character! I know Hermione is strong enough to survive but I am worried for Elizabeth!
Really lovely characterisations once again. I'm greatly enjoying your interpreation of both Snape and Hermione.
'He shifted distractedly and plopped a pillow into his lap to hide his growing welcome to her with a flabbergasted grimace' - hahaha, delicious.
I snorted at 'Niffler to gold' too.
Excellent, looking forward to seeing how things play out back at Hogwarts x
Really enjoying this story, looking forward to further installments xxx
This is such a good story! Looking forward to reading more.
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