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By : SickPuppy
  • From phoenix-rob on June 02, 2017

    Horcrux??? I know Harry doesn't want to be left alone - Albus considered it but I like his reasonings not to go this pathway.

    Severus will consider that Harry could live with an altered version of himself but ultimately I don't think Snape will be prepared to pay the level of price for killing Lupin.

    Remus truly has become a twisted individual - he was a family friend, an 'uncle' to Harry and a great teacher - is there some unknown reason why he needed to be such a bastard? Is he becoming like Greyback and dominating werewolfs to make his own pack or is he just possessive towards Harry?

    Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.


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  • From Book_addict_89 on June 02, 2017

    Sounds like an excellent compromise! 

    Cursed Child makes me sad and books over films all the time!


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  • From Dedicated_Reader on June 01, 2017

    I wasn't sure I wanted to read this story or not, I passed over it a lot while looking for a story to read. However, I finally caved. I have to admit, I'm stuck. It's sick and twisted and it feels wrong that I like it so much, lol! I'm surpsingly excited about the next chapter, so bring it on!


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  • From Book_addict_89 on May 31, 2017

    So I hate Lupin! And to quote Thunderbird's earlier review someone (preferably Harry or Snape) need to "punch him in his stupid wolfy face" ideally with a chair... horrible wolf! 

    Snape definitely needs a superhero costume - although I can't decide if picturing him with pants on over his clothes Superman style is appealing or not? 

    Can't wait for the rest 

    xx


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  • From phoenix-rob on May 31, 2017

    Great chapter.

    I really want Harry to be able to stand up to Lupin.

    Shouldn't Dumbledore be able to sense the Lupin has entered Hogwarts wards and investigate why he is back.

    Snape also would have wards on his accommodation and I know he wouldn't have given Lupin permission to enter them.

    They both should be on their way to save Harry now.


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  • From imageekiknowit on May 30, 2017

    I JUST CAUGHT UP!!!! I have been away from my computer for the last week and have not had the chance to catch up and read until now. In response to some of the past A/Ns,

    Chapter 12: I am getting the emails thank you! I love Drarry like Snarry, and can read other pairing but it depends on what the pairings are, the main pairing of the story, what the topic is, things like that. I also like Lomonaaeren and her works, but there are SO MANY and I try to read every story that has a pairing I like after I find an author writing HP, so trying to catch up to all of her works is a PAIN! I can happily say that I have not skimmed any of these chapters! I LOVED THEM!!!

    Chapter 13 (I know I didn't comment but I have some on the A/Ns you left anyways): YES YOU ARE A F***ING SNARRY TEASE I JUST FINISHED CHAPTER 15 YOU FART!!!! *mutters "still liked it though..."* You have NO IDEA about perverts following you. I know that was a joke, but after reading that comment I just started laughing and I thought about how it was about Snarry being in public?! I read one where they marry and Harry becomes pregnant AT AGE ELEVEN AND I AM STILL LOOKING FOR MORE LIKE THAT! (Just something I found funny.) You wrote "Don't worry, I don't hold off the Snarry until the last chapter (although there is some Snarry in the final chapter)." DA HECK DOES THAT MEAN?!?!? Probably that its when we get a full sex scene without a wolf but I am confuzzuled.

    Chapter 14: I enjoyed the "stop that" comments from Snape, it was so very Snape like and they actually DIDN'T stop this time so YAY! How important is that rewrite exactly and how much has been changed? Like a paragraph?

    Chapter 15 (just in general for this entire chapter): FUCK YOU!!!! THEY WERE SO CLOSE!!!! AND YOU ARE MOST LIKELY LAUGHING AT THIS AND IF NOT THEN PLEASE DO BECAUSE I AM JUST WRITING THIS LIKE I AM YELLING TO GET A SMILE AND A LAUGH OUT OF YOU AS I AM MAD THAT THEY SEXY TIME DID NOT COMMENCE AND THEY DIDN'T EVEN GET TO SEVERUS BEING FULLY INSIDE OF HIM!!!! AND THEN YOU MAKE THEM ALL SAD!!!! CAN THEY PLEASE HAVE THE HAPPY TIMES SOON?!?! JUST THEM CUDDLING ON THE COUCH WOULD BE NICE!!! *realizes that you mentioned already finishing writing the story* dang it... oh well...
    Also, I don't generally write replies because I am busy or on the run while reading these stories or have no patience to write one because I want to be on the next story or just because I have a hard time understanding how other people receive my comments and if they understand what I am trying to say. Just look at what I wrote in the caps, I made sure to include that it was a joke (sort of, the anger was the joke, the frustration wasn't) because I wanted to make sure you knew it was a joke. So that makes me more wary of writing them, especially when it is a criticism or a critique on something, like needing a beta for spelling or grammar issues, or there needing to be more information about something. I will usually follow that up with praises for their story idea or something like that, but I just don't want to insult them. If the author or story sticks out to me, then I am more likely to write a reply, like you did when you responded and there is this other story with serious issues with spelling and grammar but had an awesome idea for a story. I am trying to write more reviews in general because I was following a story but the author gave it up for adoption due to lack of reviews, and I am for certain things but not as often as I should. Just thought I would give you a reason that some don't give reviews as a person who doesn't really leave reviews that often, and you should feel special because I mostly only leave reviews on Fanfiction.net, but I like you so I am going to keep reviewing.
    As long as you update I don't care when you do honestly.

    You do not have to respond to all of that I was just making up for lost time and making sure to give you the proper response you deserve. Also, you brought this on yourself for saying you like long reviews. See you for the next chapter! (I am free the rest of this week so I will be writing responses!)


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  • From Book_addict_89 on May 30, 2017

    My heartbroke a little bit for Harry in this chapter. Just wanted to wrap him up in a blanket and hug him. If anyone can help him though it will be Severus. xx


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  • From Apothic on May 30, 2017

    No negative reviews from me. Fine, if you're going to make us wait for it. It's an interesting idea. Can't wait to read more!


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  • From Nightstar on May 30, 2017

    Wow poor harry, sorry for snape next chapter lol. Short chapter but i can deal!!


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  • From Book_addict_89 on May 28, 2017

    Sassy Harry is becoming my favourite Harry. I almost spat my drink out laughing at his 5 points to Slytherin quip. Looking forward to the next chapter - Christmas always has been my favourite time of year... xx


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  • From Thunderbird on May 28, 2017

    No need for any more "ho-humming." These things happen sometimes (I never know what it is that makes people review or not review), but you should know you wrote two great chapters. I just got the chance to read them both and I thoroughly enjoyed them (including Snape's "stop that"... I love it that it was getting harder and harder for him to resist Harry, little minx that he is). Looks like that resistance is nearly shattered! Can't wait for Ch 15!


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  • From Book_addict_89 on May 26, 2017

    Totally agree with NIGHTSTAR what that says about me I'm not quite sure... 

    Can't wait for more!


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  • From Nightstar on May 23, 2017

    Ooh that would have  been sweet some draco  action yeah!!, lol i would have even taken some snape loving in front of people. Harry having a hard time trying to deal. Still here your perverted reader 😋


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  • From Thunderbird on May 23, 2017

    Just read this fic from beginning to Ch. 12, and I'm really enjoying it! I'll be honest, I was cautious to read it at first, because stories with rape scenes aren't always my cup of tea, but you handled it well, not making the violence too drawn out but also not sweeping the emotional trauma of it under the rug. I really felt for Harry in those first few chapters. I'm so glad that Snape stepped up from the beginning and gave him the support he needed. And Lupin! Grrrr... I want to punch him in his stupid wolfy face.

    Of course, now I just wish Snape would get over himself and fuck Harry already! :) We all know it's inevitable.

    Can't wait for more!


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  • From phoenix-rob on May 23, 2017

    Harry and Severus are trying to get it sorted but unfortunately the wolf may not let them. Love how they are timing Harry's "release" around school hours.

    Draco really needs to learn to keep his mouth shut and hands to himself - lucky Severus & Hermione were present to protect him from Harry/wolf's anger.

    Can't wait to see what happens next as I don't believe Albus will be particulary happy ... wonder what scheme he will come up with - Marriage? to get around teacher/student rules!

    Update soon please - loving the story

     


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