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Reviews for A Tender Moment

By : NLAP
  • From Persy on September 18, 2021

    Had it ALL!!!! Drama, smut, love, romance. EXCELLENT!!!


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  • From Peahen on June 25, 2018

    Beautiful AND hot!   I loved it.   Ty


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  • From Peahen on June 25, 2018

    Beautiful AND hot!   I loved it.   Ty


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  • From Peahen on June 25, 2018

    Beautiful AND hot!   I loved it.   Ty


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  • From Snapeswhore on September 03, 2017

    Good ideas, good plot. Your English is understandable, you just need a Beta reader to give a clean up with tenses and some words. Good job


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  • From ANON - SL on July 22, 2017

    Thanks for the story!  I find it sweet. Also, the feeling-duplicating potion was quite an interesting, magical invention!


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  • From ANON - SL on July 11, 2017

    Keep it up! I wonder how tge story would move forward in post-war environment.


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  • From ANON - Petite Mule on July 04, 2017

    Thank you for update. Can't wait to read more

     


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  • From ANON - on July 02, 2017

    Love this story! Please update again as soon as possible!! 


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  • From ANON - Petite Mule on June 29, 2017

    I love it! Dark fantaisy and all. I hope you will write more of it. Thank you.


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  • From AFFModerator on May 28, 2017

    Please correct your disclaimer.

    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that it’s just for fun or just for entertainment purposes is not enough.

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  • From Mistress on May 26, 2017

    Very intense. I'm curious to see where the story goes. Definitely waiting for new chapters. I can also relate to the fact that English is your second language, so as mine so grammar mistakes are unavoidable. Try to proofread before posting each chapter. Other then that, very nice beginning. 


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