Just wanted to say hello and say thank you for another great story.  I wanted to compliment your work in making the wizard worlds move into a totalitarian state so believable with the use of existing prejudice and propaganda.

I was looking forward to the reappearance of McLaggen and while his recruitment into the Deatheaters was fairly likely, I am enjoying the time you are taking to show Draco leading him into darkness in easier to handle steps. Kill an old Muggle, rape, ... Turning McLaggen into a willing evil death eater rather than just taking the quick route from school rapist to 2-dimensional bad guy.

meltyman

Hey Gandalf

my hats off to you sir. However on another note I am practically on my knees begging for more chapters for DB and YBiD. As always though I’m a huge fan of your stories, they always grab me and pull me into the story and takes you on an journey with every chapter and keeps me on the edge of my seat with an awesome and engaging story line. As always thanks for your time and keep up the good work  

Another great chapter GB. I look forward to more. I see how you are alternating updates between the three stories and I think its brilliant so you don't burn out on just one story. It's good to take a break from a story once in awhile. Can't wait till the next chapter

Another great chapter GB. I look forward to more. I see how you are alternating updates between the three stories and I think its brilliant so you don't burn out on just one story. It's good to take a break from a story once in awhile. Can't wait till the next chapter

Another great chapter GB. I do hope that Cormac and Draco get their comeuppance before long. Can't wait till the next chapter. I am currently rereading MIL and just finished rereading HFLP.

I’m really enjoying this - a similar theme to your other stories but with a different slant. Will there be a coven? I kind of hope so, but won’t be surprised if there isn’t. Hopefully the muse will be inspired to revisit this story soon. 

I was wondering when we would run into McLaggen again

Seemed like a perfect death nibbler or at least a fellow traveller

Another well crafted story, thank you

GB, it's great to see you writing more YBID and DB chapters. I love reading these two stories. Still going strong           with those two stories.

Please add some chapters to Damaged Bridges, and also Yuletide Blessing in Disguise. Moments in Love was an amazing experience and I believe you wrote the story as it should be written. Please try to find the time to get some more chapters posted, cause I'm hanging on the edge of my seat for both stories. Keep up the awesome work.

Another great chapter GB

Another great chapter GB . Love the developments. My wife has told me several times I should try my hand at some hp/hg fanfiction . Not sure how to or where in the hp timeline to start my story at.  Could you give me some suggestions ? Thanks again for more great writing . Loved reading HFLP, YBID ,MIL , and DB.  loom forward to reading more of your work. 

Really enjoying the story once I was able to get past the first few chapters and eveything they detailed.  Keep up the great writing!

CH1 - I was cheering Harry on from the sidelines when he told his teachers what for. It's about time someone told Dumbledore what an absolute prat he has been!

And when you had Malfoy mention Merlin was a Slytherin I grinned. I tell that to anyone I can!

You made Ron a right royal prat (which, yes, he is). Good to see him not being forgiven.

Oh, and you said British fry ups were popular/common. Er, not so sure on that one ... certainly, where I live and grew up, cereal was the norm. Maybe I just didn't/don't live in the right part of the UK!

Enjoying this. SP

Ty for the responseGB. I had forgotten about Sirius' gift so I can now see the logic better. With how long Harry waits in the common room I still think he would have thought of the map though perhaps not in time to stop what happened. 

Personally I never had much of a problem with Harry using the sectumsempra on Draco as when you are in a fight for your life you should be prepared to use every weapon you have. All Harry knew was that it was "for enemies" so yes it was reckless and rather stupid to use but in the rush of events I personally would have been surprised if he didn't use it.

thanks again and take care

Thrilled to see you starting another story GB.  I am curious about why Harry waited for Hermione all night when he has the Marauder's Map though.  If he doesnt have it you may want to address why pretty soon as it seems to be a pretty big plot hole. 

Im going to have trouble waiting on an update since you only just posted the first bite;) Keep up the great work.  i loved your addition to HFLP and the latest installments of MIL have been great.  I like the fact that you have made enough changes to make both stories worth following.