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Reviews for His Twenty-Eighth Life

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From SickPuppy on September 06, 2017

    Ch7 - Any chance of a glimpse into life 23 (yum!)? And Voldie is definitely behaving oddly. I like how you take canon events (e.g. the Longbottoms' torture) and reference it, but in a new way. SP


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  • From Anaelyssa on September 06, 2017

    Ch 6. Voldemort's attitude is interesting. Good to see non-evil Dumbles and Snape.

    I hope at some point when we're further into the story and it won't count as spoilers, you'll post a review-chart of Harry's past lives just so we can keep them straight. It's not needed now, but if you keep referring to them, it might be necessary in 10-20 more chapters.

     
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  • From SickPuppy on August 30, 2017

    Ch5 - Interesting. Can Harry do that one thing and forgive Voldermort? And might it work? Hmm. SP


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  • From Jan on August 30, 2017

    I am so intrigued with life 19, can't wait to find out more of it. I am also intrigued with the concept of Harry forgiving Voldemort.... I mean Voldemort is seeing all of his pass mistakes, but then he thinks himself superior to them all (even if they are his pass selves), hope he doesn't betray Harry. Please update chapter 6 soon.

     


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  • From Anaelyssa on August 30, 2017

    Ch 5

    That's a dangerous game they play. Oooh. More clues about the nineteenth life. Sounds fun, but I hope it doesn't become Harry's downfall.

     
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  • From Jan on August 23, 2017

    A very interesting story, I'm intrigued to see how it'll turn out, please update chapter 5 soon. 


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  • From Anaelyssa on August 23, 2017

    Ch 3: It's good that they all have realistic expectations and don't slip into cliches. I do hope that Voldemort will still retain most of his character until the end of the fic and not turn into some redeemed Tom Riddle.

    I enjoyed reading about the Longbottoms.

    Oooh. Cat-speak. Look forward to find out his other abilities from past lives.

     
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  • From SickPuppy on August 16, 2017

    I did wonder, when Voldie kidnapped Harry, what he was planning. Now it makes sense. But, eek! Poor Harry, having to tell all to save his family, yet still find a way to defeat Voldie in some new way. Geez! SP


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  • From Anaelyssa on August 16, 2017

    Ch 3: No, no, no. Please keep the delicious hints. I just don't want you to tell us outright and spoil the fun of anticipation.

    Interesting to see their interaction. They seem to be on more or less even ground. In that Harry *could* escape, if he were willing to face the consequences.

    So now Harry will be Voldemort's persona Scheherezade.

     
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  • From SickPuppy on August 10, 2017

    Life number nineteen... please explain it! And this is such an intriguing start! SP


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  • From Anaelyssa on August 10, 2017

    Ch 2:
    Poor Harrykins. I wonder what theories his parents will have about how weird he acted all this time. Looking forward to what happens when he wakes up.

    Yup yup, definitely looking forward to life 19. I wonder if he was a skunk or something. (No spoilers please.)

     
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  • From Anaelyssa on August 02, 2017

    An interesting start so far. Looking forward to more. Especially hearing about that life that he doesn't want to remember.

     
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