Reviews for A World Not Fit To Live In

BY : snowblind12 & ~*LissaDream


  • From Asuka_Bloodberry on September 30, 2017

    Great job!!  This story is quite interesting!! I'm wondering what's up with Draco, and what it means the signs Lucius and Narcissa were talking! I really hope if Hermione ends married with a Malfoy, she ends married to Lucius instead Draco, with his present attitude she won't survive at all! 

    I Hope to read More Soon!!!



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  • From wildkitsune on September 29, 2017

    This was a great chapter, I am not sure how much I would have been able to keep reading if things had kept going as they were.  I like that Lucius is not a good man, but he isn't a monster either.  Though it seems like Draco is a monster.  I like how we still really don't know Snape's motives and that he seems to at least be taking good care of Ginny.

    I'm looking forward to future chapters, and I hope to see your guy's other story updated soon as well?  If you guys ever want to chat with a fellow writer/reader you can find me at thesubmissivefox@gmail.com



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  • From The_Last_Echo on September 29, 2017

    Yoo! I'm loving this story. Sorry I don't review often. I can't always login to my account. I was wondering you you both would be interested in third party brainstorming? I have a great piece for the next chapter I think would help thicken the plot a little more. 

    Loving this! Can't wait for more!

    Xoxo

    -Echo



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  • From RequiredReading on September 16, 2017

    Okay, so I was tearing up while reading the latest chapter. I am kind of captivated by this story.  Draco is so mean. Wow.

    BTW, can someone please clear up Hermione's UTI?



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  • From RequiredReading on August 27, 2017

    Wow!  I usually like a light and fluffy Draco, but I have to admit to enjoying dark, bastard Draco in this story. Not going to lie, though, I will hold out hope for him ending up caring about her. How dare Lucius leave her unsatisfied!  Anyway, to sum up, I am enjoying this story and look forward to the rest of it. 



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