Reviews for Torment *Completed*By : Kvarta |
Haven’t seen a post from you in a while. Hope everything is well.
I’m glad that Hermione got in the way of all these plans." - are you sure? Tell me that after this chapter - I see what you mean. But I still don’t feel bad about it. Slytherins should know not to get caught, but if they do then they should suffer the consequences. That is what all this is about. All the people in this house are suffering consequences for their actions, including Hermione. Of course, I understand the need for Lucius to make things better for his family. It just didn’t work out right this time. 😂
Severus..... he just doesn’t know what a “better life” means. Rights now, I bet he is bored out of his mind and suffering as much, if not more, than Hermione. He just won’t admit it.
Draco 🤔 his growing on me.
Poor Hermione, can’t do anything right.
75: Slytherins are more complicated than chemistry. 🐍 🤦🏻♀️
I’m glad that Hermione got in the way of all these plans. It’s too funny that Lucius’ plans didn’t work but he underestimated Hermione’s need to defend people. 😂
Now what the hell is he planning now? More mysteries...😕
Ungrateful bastards! 😡 And what is this nonsense about Muggle women being more timid!
We can’t blame her for what she never learned. - Cissa is the only one that makes sense.
If Lucius is planning something, then he should be careful. Hermione is turning into her old self, and her old self was no pushover.
Peacocks from Muggles! 😂 Wasn’t expecting that! Had to laugh at the situation.
Well, at least Hermione got some show of gratitude from Lucius with the use of his library.
I wonder how Severus is going to act after Hermione stood up for Lucius. After all, even Lilly would never had done that since she never approved of his friends.
Why did Lucius get irritated that Potter showed his trial verdict to Hermione? Was he embarrassed or just felt it was an invasion of privacy?
I love Poppy! She know Severus too well. 😂
Is Lucius really ill or is he manipulating Severus? Either way, it give Severus a reason to live. Also, I bet Lucius knew Hermione would listen in on them.
Poor Hermione. 😣 she doesn’t know that Severus has seen one of her most embarrassing moments.
Playing with Slytherins is tricky. 😈 Poor Severus, he can’t seem to comprehend that someone (Hermione) might actually care for him. I’m curious why Draco was there too!
Mystery girl = denial 🤦🏻♀️
Severus’ mind just can’t seem to grasp that he might be really attracted to her.
Bargaining chip? Hermione is about to make a deal with the devil.😈 What is Severus planning? I bet he hated it when she compared him and Lucius to Ron. 😂
Ron needs a smack on the head. He may be grieving but he needs to keep himself in check.
Harry can’t seem to handle the truth just yet.
Hermione is getting better.
Severus and Lucius are just Slytherins. Lucius goes through all the trouble of spying and talking to Severus instead of just saying, “ hey Severus, that girl might not be a bad choice for you. Draco and I won’t get in the way.” 😏 I goes he knows Severus needs proof that Hermione is over Ron.
And Severus 🤦🏻♀️ he doesn’t want to be alone with his thoughts but he does everything to keep her away. Human are so complicated.
That block of wood was completely undeserving of a woman Hermione Granger will be one day. -was that Lucius thinking?
Yeah, I have never liked Ron . 🤮
😊 seems like Severus is showing a bit of feelings for her. If nothing else he seems to respect her enough to know that she is better than Ron. 😂 Even Lucius doesn’t like him enough to invite him into the house.
67: I always love Hermione and Severus interacting.
Poor Severus. 🤔 I think he was so certain that he would die in the end, that now that he is alive he doesn’t really know what to do. Especially since life has been good to him. Why would he want to continue? Hopefully Hermione will give him a good reason. 😊
Although Hermione is mad at the headmaster, the truth was that everyone was just a tool during war.
🐕 Dog! Really Severus! I’m surprised Poppy didn’t 👋🏼 hit him upside the head for that comment.
At least now Severus is willing to admit to himself that Hermione is a much better person than Lilly ever was. Forgiving. Compassionate. Etc. Maybe that’s why he felt a tiny bit bad that he had made her angry and rejected her friendship.
I wonder what memories Harry is afraid Severus would/could use against Hermione? 🤭
lucius is still a bit of a jerk but at least Cissy is much nicer.
🤔 perhaps he doesn’t want her know because then she will fill even more thankful and indebted to him. Then, he would REALLY never get rid of her. 😂 But probably he just doesn’t want anyone to know he can be nice.
64: welcome back. Hope you’re feeling better.
Do as I say and not as I do!😂 Seems like Severus wants Hermione to analyze her feelings while he is unable to!
I do not scream, Granger. - 😂 Severus never wants to admit he is human.
I wonder who Hermione will have a talk with?
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