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By : Thunderbird
  • From OnYourTongueLikePixieDust on September 07, 2021

    I have now managed to read everything that you have posted on here and I am riveted and cannot wait for the next chapter. I have no idea what to read in the interim or even if I want to read anything else while I wait. 

    I think of all your stories this one is the most frustrating, but in a good way. The slow burn, the different POVs that take you to another part when you just want to know what happens next. But most frustrating is Hermione. I have found myself screaming at my phone while I read begging her to tell Vesper all about it as that would solve everything. 

    Please write again soon. 

    I await the next installment with baited breath. 


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  • From Shaymarsh640 on July 23, 2020

    So I have been following along with everything you've been posting, and enjoying in thoroughly, but I haven't taken the time to compliment you as I should. As always, I love your stories. I love your imagination and your vision of the lives these characters have taken on after canon ended. I recently found myself watching the final scene from Deathly Hallows somewhere and thinking, "Oh yeah, that's what JK thought happened." Your stories are so real and alive in my head that her ending caught me by surprise.

    I go back to your stories over and over again, I wanted you to know. I find comfort in the way you have written Harry and Draco, and during a time when I'm very much alone (besides my kids, which doesn't count), their magnetism and love helps me feel like there is hope. And it's not even just about Drarry either. I LOVED the way Narcissa confronted Harry about asking for help and how much her and Molly love him. Normally I connect with Draco more, but in that moment, I was Harry - doing it all myself and forgetting that if I ask for help, it'll be there. The motherly love, the friendship, all of it. Right in the feels. 

    I am genuinely looking forward to reading the wedding vows, the reaction to seeing each other's rings (finding out the color of Draco's essence), and the wedding night. I hope Draco got enough sleep on shift to make it a doozy. I'm so grateful for your willingness to write and share this. You have a gift. I could go on and on about all the details that I love, but it's pretty much everything, so I'll just leave it at this: Thank you.


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  • From goddess-of_dragons on July 09, 2020

    Omg omg omg!!! This chapter totally could have continued and I would have been totally fine!!! I haven't been on here for a while and was very glad to see this chapter pop up. I can't wait till Mila has her baby boy!! And to hear the vows!! And their trip!! And teddy!!! And maybe a little interaction between Blaise and vesper. Just to see how they act around everyone else. Omg!!! And I've still been following this story on AO3. 

    Im hoping to have the first chapter of my story edited by the end of this weekend (as long as marital issues don't get in the way). And I understand about the summer. My mom was a para and needed income during the summer. All is well health wise here. I hope all is well with you. Can't wait for the next chapter.


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  • From KaneONeill on June 21, 2020

    I love the story, keep up the good work! I really like the time and effort you’ve put 8nto the relationships and developing the characters as a whole. 


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  • From goddess-of_dragons on May 28, 2020

    AAAHHHH! I'm so excited!!! I didn't know that you posted this chapter but I got a notification for another story that I started reading on here (even though it also is on ao3 and fanfiction.net) and was skimming through through to see if any other stories were updated here and that's when I saw yours! I was happy! Even though this chapter made my cry a little. I'm glad I can help with some of the motivation. I've been trying to find my own as well lately.

    I've been redoing JADIP but it is slow going because something was happening with my computer and it was being stupid so I had to get a new one and now that I have a new one and am getting things going, my mom has decided to give me her laptop (which is a lot better) so I'm going to be transferring everything again. As for my drarry, I got three chapters done (which is half of a normal composition notebook) when I started having my other story edited so now I'm going back through and editing it again so that it's more descriptive and flows smoother. I don't have a beta for drarry so it's taking more time.

    My fam is doing okay. My hubby finally got a job again and we are slowly getting back to normal with all ours bills and stuff. I hope everything is going okay for you. You had mentioned before that you are a teacher (I think). I hope everything has been okay for you.


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  • From ANON - Anon on May 26, 2020

    The truth will out.

    After a while, at least. ^_^


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  • From goddess-of_dragons on January 20, 2020

    OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!! I nearly screamed when i saw this. Im so excited!!! So the first question i had was is draco going to talk to harry about this because he knows that ves trusts harry as much (if not more than) draco? Next thing. It makes sense that if the green adders would want to reak havoc while doing something else to cause damage. Is there another party involved? Something that i have been wondering about is this. Is robbards a part of the green adders and no one knows? Will harry ever be told the truth about what is going on? Why wouldnt mac and ves just go to kingsley? Yeah hes the minister and its going over robbards head but everyone has to know the theories sooner or later right? Arg! So many questions that i have to wait for answers on! Lol! Oh and what about harry and draco chapters? I want to know how house life has been now that they have had a house elf for a while and not everything has been falling to harry (or at least not as much) and what about mila? Is the father of her baby someone who is associated with either the green adders or this other party if there is one? Lots of questions that i know will be answered in chapters to come but im to excited and needed to ask now lol.


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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2020

    Ha-ha!  New chapter, and a brand-spanking new theory!  Love it.


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  • From myliewilde on January 19, 2020

    So happy to see an update on this one!! Still loved reading your other works you have had going on though. 


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  • From HaplessParadox on January 18, 2020

    Really glad you decided to continue this, I thought it was just another abandoned story, which would have been a pity because it's a good story.


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  • From SpaceandThyme on February 01, 2019

    Just wanted to say I thought this was a perfect sequel to Say My Name. I know you’re not working on this right now but I really loved the relationships and dynamics in the story. I particularly loved seeing Hermione and Ron developing into a mature relationship as I don’t often read that in fics (I love them together but as a background couple to Harry/Draco). I hope to see the wedding someday. I’m guessing the storylines will converge around the Green Adders at some point - I imagine Harry and Draco would be pretty big targets for neo- Death Eaters. Anyway, great work and thanks for posting.


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  • From SuperWolfLover_1776 on December 14, 2018

    "happening alot faster" its been months MONTHS please please PLEASE tell me you did not abadon it


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  • From SuperWolfLover_1776 on November 07, 2018

    Updates will be happening faster?!?!

    REALLY!?!?

    three months

    THREE MONTHS!!!!!!!

    did you ,did you     ..abandon it?


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  • From Teddy-Potter95 on August 08, 2018

    So happy to see you’re back to writing! I really like the inner conflict for both Vesper and Hermione and I loved how you’ve put them together as a comparison. It is interesting to see how much this is impacting on Hermione as she’s not as “need to know” as she normally is. I’m excited to see where it goes and I can’t wait for Ron to find out but I also don’t want him to get hurt. Thanks again for taking time out to write :) 


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  • From goddess-of_dragons on August 07, 2018

    I MISSED YOU!!!!! I always think of this story and second education. I'm glad your back. This chapter was interesting. Ves was going to talk about the abortion was she? I can't wait to find out what's going on with the case and if she lets Harry and Draco know whats going on as well as talk to Blaise about everything.


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