i have just gotten an account to review our story.

i love this story and cheak for it every day so please keep up the great work and update again soon : )

Cant wait for more of this.

-Dauth_Daret

Well that was lovely half-surprise!

I figured Blaise, once you mentioned that Draco wouldn't be a mate that it would be someone underused. Lucius was a nice touch though, he is one of my favorites. 

I'm a "Harry is a perpetual bottom except in special circumstances" person and him bottoming to Severus wasn't my favorite. It was also very lack luster, as though it was just something that needed to happen, but I didn't get a sense of either party particularly enjoying it. Granted, that is sex in a lot of cases, but I was a bit disappointed.

Also, everyone is taking this too well! Lucius especially would need to put up more of a fight I would think. I'll give Blaise's reaction a pass though since he's just kind of horn dogging around.

I like this story, truly, I'm just used to there being more emotion involved; everything just comes off so even keeled. Could very well be my lady instincts though, needing things to be more charge and emotive than necessary.

Please keep up the good work! It's coming along quite well.

Best,

SkiPi

I'm glad Harry was with Severus first.

Oh, this last chapter was hot and spicy, with a little clumsiness in there but still very enjoyable! (Go Harry)Please update chapter 13 soon.

Interesting. I quite like this. Been reading it all since yesterday and really have no idea why I didn't read it before. I OF COURSE like that Severus is one of his mates and I think it's good that his most dominant creature chose Snape because it makes sense that he would be the first and most senior of the mates. I'm guessing that Draco is silver and that he will be one of the mates but not positive. Harry didn't react when Draco knocked into him. I'm leaning towards him matching with the dangerous creature and his best friend who sleeps around will match with the incubus. Though that will HAVE to stop. No way will Harry want a cheating mate. Theo strikes me as someone who would have rougher hands than Blaise. It'll be fun to see how the relationships go together.

I really like the anonymous journal too. Looking forward to reading more :)

Great Story. Is harry's other mates draco and blaise

I rebooted my account specifically to review!

I'm really enjoying this story and always look forward to the next chapter. It's hard to keep going when there's no feedback, good or bad. I will say the pen names Harry and Draco picked were bland and did nothing to hide who Harry's incubus mate would be, but I feel as though you weren't trying to make it a hard guess anyway :)

As for further developements, I'm guess Voldemort for the his third mate, or possibly even that he won't have one.

Keep up the wonderful work!

My most humble apologies for having not revived yet! I'm loving this story in major amounts! Now that its reached over ten chapters it has a place in my windows left open to follow. 

The three creature feature is delightful. As well as the slow build burn between Harry and Severus. Have always loved those two as a pairing. Please keep up the wonderful writing, you have a devoted fan here.

Kitty5tatts

Sorry for not reviewing, been really busy lately, and somehow I was logged off this site, and I couldn't remember what email I used, let alone which password out of the hundreds that I have had over the years, keep in mind that the last time I logged in was about... almost 6 years ago when I first got this tablet, and ever since it automatically logs me in.... so yeah, that was a fun adventure cause it wasn't letting me review without me signing in 😞

Lol, I simply love your Harry, he's so spicy and witty in this story, it just has me laughing at unexpected times, like with this last chapter, the fact that Severus was able to see Harry wanking to Remus! Oh if only Remus knew 😂  that would historical! Please update chapter 9 soon.

Happy to be back! 😊 what can I say, I'm addicted to your writing. I can't stop thinking if Silver is Draco, or if this story is gonna have a twist and silver turns out to be a completely different person, or even and new character! And if so will he also be Harry's mate?

Hmm, wonder when Severus is going to start letting Harry get close to him, I like that he's using the occlumency lessons to get a little closer to him, in a discreetly fashion. Can't wait for chapter 6.

Interesting start, can't wait to read more, please update chapter 5 soon.