I honestly never leave reviews on anything.  However, I got through at least a paragraph of this fiction and let me say; fuck you! This is the most disturbing and ILLEGAL thing I have ever had the misfortune of accidentally clicking on.  You should honestly feel so ashamed! I'm forwarding this to JK myself and reporting this.  You are a sad excuse for a Harry Potter fan and you seriously need help! This is unacceptable! It is never okay to hurt a child let alone write about it in this fantasy light.  You are an absolute sickening excuse for a human being.  I seriously hope I am able to track your IP, find you employer in order to send this to them and have you fired.  Since you think it's all fine and dandy to fantasize about harming and traumatizing/ruining a child''s life.  let's see how you like it. 

you have alot of understanding and speech on the part of Harry, most children of one dont have the capability to do either. my own daughter said her first words shortly before turning on and would in no way have the mental awareness to understand if something is scary or not. you should perhaps change Harry's age to two or 2 1/2 or even 3 and have james waiting for him to hit 3 or 4. it would make more sence.

Omg this is sooo hot!! Must continue more!!

Freeway start, love Sirius's involvement and the slight feminization

i love this start. twisted and dirty and great. 

Looking forward to more 😁

Not a bad start at all, I love stories with heavy sex magic involved! Hope to see a lot here!