Reviews for Scattered

BY : Tnteacups


  • From Thunderbird on August 31, 2018

    I love this story. You have such skill with the slow burn. Though I am a little impatient to see them finally sort out their feelings (and get it on haha), every chapter that brings them closer to understanding and caring for each other is really enjoyable. There's so much rich detail here. I also love that while the setting is dark, it's not depressing, much like with The Hole (which I also loved). It keeps me coming back for more. Please update soon!



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  • From Kickismiles on July 18, 2018

    Really enjoying it so far. Please please update. 



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  • From DSOB on June 19, 2018

    Please update sooon

    i actually really like how the story builds, good job!



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  • From Thunderbird on June 04, 2018

    Yay, glad you're continuing this!

    I know you felt like this chapter was kind of filler but I liked it! You gave some important background about the war, plus we all can take a guess at what Snape was dreaming about when he was under that curse :) I wonder how he's going to handle it once he and Hermione started prying into each other's minds in the Legilimency lessons.

    Looking forward to more!



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  • From Snapeswhore on April 29, 2018

     

    feverish heat surrounding her as he drug his nose along the edge of her pulled-back hair.

     

    "dragged" not "drug" I don't know why so many people misuse this word, it drives me nuts. Does "drug" actually sound right to anyone. Read it out loud. 



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  • From Clem_ on April 28, 2018

    a great chapter !



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  • From Clem_ on April 28, 2018

    a great chapter !



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