Reviews for Scattered

BY : Tnteacups


  • From DSOB on June 19, 2018

    Please update sooon

    i actually really like how the story builds, good job!



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  • From Thunderbird on June 04, 2018

    Yay, glad you're continuing this!

    I know you felt like this chapter was kind of filler but I liked it! You gave some important background about the war, plus we all can take a guess at what Snape was dreaming about when he was under that curse :) I wonder how he's going to handle it once he and Hermione started prying into each other's minds in the Legilimency lessons.

    Looking forward to more!



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  • From Snapeswhore on April 29, 2018

     

    feverish heat surrounding her as he drug his nose along the edge of her pulled-back hair.

     

    "dragged" not "drug" I don't know why so many people misuse this word, it drives me nuts. Does "drug" actually sound right to anyone. Read it out loud. 



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  • From Clem_ on April 28, 2018

    a great chapter !



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  • From Clem_ on April 28, 2018

    a great chapter !



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