Reviews for Just Another Day in ParadiseBy : goddess-of_dragons |
OMG I loved the chapter. I can't wait to read more. I am always thinking about the story. When I think I figured how it will go you throw a curve ball at me. Which is a good thing. The person that hasn't been mentioned in awhile is Hermione's parents. But I also want to know what or favorite potion master thinks on the whole situation. Man I think I have it figured out but I want to wait and see if I am right. You keep me on the edge of my seat with every chapter you write. I look forward to seeing more chapters.
Agh I'm so behind on my reading! And I will admit I was also excited to see that I had three chapters to read only to be shocked at how much angst was thrown my way. Not in a bad way, though :) I like some angst in my stories. I don't love the way Draco handled everything, but I understand why he did it that way. The feminist in me wants to say why couldn't he see Hermione as a partner who could help him with this? But I liked the parallel you drew between Draco and Harry and Harry's choice to leave Ginny behind during the Horcrux hunt. He did what he had to do even though Ginny was perfectly capable of taking care of herself. This was a different situation, though, I thought, and I hope Draco can see that. I'm glad Narcissa is in the picture to (hopefully) talk some sense into him and to help give Hermione perspective.
Can't wait to see what Draco's installment brings! <3
Oh no made me sad. I am happy to hear that they will make up. It just upsets me that Draco & Hermione can't be happy. I hate that they got hate mail. Who would send Draco a death threat? Will he let Hermione know about it? Will Kingsley find out about the death threat? So many questions so little time to get answers. Please don't keep me in supence much longer. I must know what happens. I have a thought on who might have sent a death threat to Draco. It might have been Lucius Malfoy or the boy that has the hots for our girl
Just started reading but you are a good writer! The story has good flow and I'm a reader who enjoys detail- at which you're very good! I'm sure you're aware it needs some grammatical fixes, and if you ever need help with that I would be happy to assist. Just really wanted to compliment the writing.
I still don't like Patrick. but you have out done yourself again. I just want people to leave Draco and Hermione alone. they have found love with one another. why can't they just be happy together.
another question can be when did you first start to love me?
Uh-oh Patrick... what are you gonna do? I hope whatever he's up to, Hermione and Draco stay strong in the face of it. I don't want him to drive a wedge between them!
Hermione's dress sounded beautiful. I also love how much fun everyone is having together. Hurray for inter-house unity!
Also loved the little detail of Harry saying how lucky he was when he saw Ginny. I know this is a Dramione story and I'm all for that, but Harry will always be my fave and my first love. I'd love to see more of him :)
I enjoyed this chapter as well. the dress is beautiful. I am glad that they are doing a ball to show that they get past the bad blood of the past. I hope that Patrick stays away from Hermione and Draco. I dont care for him at all. that had to deal with Ron not wanting them together now the have to deal with Patrick. will they ever catch a break.
my easter was good. had family and friends together.
Another awesome chapter! Idk if you may have gotten a notification for a review I did, but was for another story, so please ignore it if you did. Keep up the awesome writing though!
Cuuuuute!!! I love the way Hermione said it back to him and his reaction afterward. So adorable. I can't wait to see what happens at the ball!
Just posted the epilogue to ASE! Would love to know your thoughts <3
I loved the chapter. I was hoping to see what Hermione was wearing to the ball. but I have to wait and see on Sunday. the gift that Draco got Hermione is beautiful. I wish I had one. I would like to wish your family a happy Easter. I cant wait for the next chapter
I love your Draco. He's such a perfect, purebood gentleman. It feels very in character but also shows how much he has grown.
And he told Hermione he loves her!!! I wonder if he meant to say it or if it just slipped out... I guess we'll find out soon?
Hope you're feeling better, hun. Being sick is no fun, but when you have to take care of the family I imagine it's ten times more draining. Don't feel pressured to have to update every week. Take care of you and yours first. That's the top priroity <3
my dear you have out done yourself again. the only thing I wished for this chapter was that it was longer. you have me sitting on the edge of my seat once again waiting for the next chapter. you are the greatest writer i know. please never stop writing.
Love it so far! Been reading for a while and waiting for the next chapter for sure! As a note, you mentioned Fred in the end when everyone was introduced. Pretty sure you meant George.
Yay! I'm enjoying the sexy times, especially knowing we're not going to get any for a few chapters. I'm wondering what's going to happen with this dance and also with this Patrick guy, who's obviously interested in Hermione and who makes me suspicious.
Hopefully he won't cause problems with Dramione. I like that they are getting better about communicating and being honest. Until next time! <3
last 2 chapters are excellent. sorry I missed the last chapter. you are out doing yourself more and more on these chapters. I hang on the edge of my seat each time waiting on the next chapter. i am happy to always give feed back on your story. as always keep up the great work.
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