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Reviews for Hermione's Keeper

By : Talented_Mrs_Lupin
  • From VeltsuVI on February 09, 2019

    Answer for when i read that savior was Ginny: Ginny?... *Re-reading...* Ginny? *third time* Ginny? *Fully confused what now has happened to Luna?*


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  • From saxman66 on February 09, 2019

    Well that had two big surprises. I wasn't expecting Draco to overdo the cutting but he's obviously hurting more than any time before. Also while Darren's actions with Corinne was risky I did expect it to backfire like that. Actually three come to think of it with a 3rd player taking Luna. Unless given how calm she looked last chapter she's had some deeper plan which is now close to completion.

     

    I must admit Draco have Corinne's brother does sound rather too convenient and also given how cold blooded she is would she actually care?

     

    However it does seem like the pair have finally actually agreed about how much they care about each other and even gotten to an engagement although I would have to agree with Draco I think its going to be a rather volatile relationship, at least for the 1st few years.

     

    However Height is obviously a problem especially since he seems to have totally lost it and also seems to at least still think he's pretty much untouchable regardless of what he does.


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  • From Annecia89 on February 09, 2019

    I think Ron has her. I’m not sure why, but that’s what I feel. Yaayyy for the engagement!! I think him having her brother hostage is just the right amount of insane for this story. 😅😅


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  • From saxman66 on February 08, 2019

    Well that was interesting. ;) They finally got it together sexually but still have a distinctly dysfunctional relationship and not sure why Hermione was so tongue-tied when it came to talking to him afterwards.

     

    Draco's reaction seemed a bit OOT but then the insight into his family 'life' and the damage his father did to him emotionally explains a lot.

     

    Good news that Darren came through and doubled up very skilfully with his handling of Corrine the sectary, although if she knows as much as Height suggested she could be nervous about shopping her boss and exposing herself to charges.

     

    I am puzzled however as to when he said he doesn't like children? Weren't most of the ones he rescued earlier pretty young so wouldn't that sound a bit odd to Height?

     

    Sorry to hear some of Draco's behaviour was based on personal experience. :(

     

      Looking forward to seeing how things develop. :)


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  • From Annecia89 on February 08, 2019

    You had tears rolling down my face. How is she this careless with her words?! Knowing how sensitive he seems to be, I don’t get it. My heart broke for him: Poor Draco! 


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  • From saxman66 on January 28, 2019

    Looking good and a lot happening here. Sounds like the wheels might be coming off Height's nasty little empire and Rita's defection could help a lot.

     

    Be interesting when you tidy up to see Olivia meet up with her dad. Good that Darren turned out to be a good guy as well.

     

    Pity they arrived when they did as it fouled up Hermione and Draco finally getting it together but they seemed to have done the important thing of sorting out the mix-up they made of their previous attempt to get together so it should be OK when they finally do.

     

    I didn't find anything odd or cruel about the comment about Pansy and Lavender abilities. A bit inflated possibly but a clear sign of Draco's respect for their abilities.


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  • From saxman66 on January 27, 2019

    Well that was an eventful chapter.

     

    On the good side it looks like some of those children may have been rescued, although by implication that a lot more were less lucky.

     

    Also that Draco was rescued from the Dementor attack, although not without a fair amount of damage being suffered. Rather surprising that so many mages were present at the right time but lucky.

     

    On the down side, between them Draco and Hermione came close to a good sex session that would have helped them both but managed to get their wires crossed and messed it up.

     

    Also if Luna has actually been kidnapped then that would be a hell of a shock, although its seems strange that the authorities are running a scheme not just for kidnapping mixed race children for abuse but also for kidnapping adults for sexual slavery and breeding. I would image as well she's such a high profile person with many powerful friends that the people responsible have to feel very confident or are really bloody stupid.

     

    I suspect Rita has been encouraged to spread the lies about Hermione and Draco but that in itself is likely to bring some nasty pay-back.

     


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  • From Annecia89 on January 27, 2019

    My Heart 💔😩😭


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  • From malugargula on January 24, 2019

    What an amazing fic

    can’t wait for more


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  • From saxman66 on January 14, 2019

    Some new twists here. It does sound like some sort of sex/paedophile ring and glad Ron reacted as he did. Hopefully it would be dynamite in the case against Height but there is the danger with the fact a lot of rich and therefore probably powerful and influential people have bought those children and that the wizarding world is socially still very backwards it may not be decisive. However trying to help the children and finding out about the others, as this is one set of documents, probably not complete, from one of those 'schools' suggests there's a hell of a lot of other victims out there. That could be a hell of a task, especially with the secretive nature of so many wizard families.

     

      Good if grim chapter.


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  • From saxman66 on January 13, 2019

    Well a lot happening here, in a number of areas. Think you have made Molly, Ron and Ginny a little too 1-D villains for my tastes but definitely an interesting story. Like Draco helping out Tonks with her son.

     

    Possibly Hermione didn't notice that 'love' in the last chapter as she seemed a little surprised by her own reaction to Draco's kiss but things are developing nicely there and the visit to Tonks for dinner is another way of getting him out of his shell.

     

    Wonder what Harry will think of those pictures but I suspect he will be quite happy with the couple.


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  • From Doreen769 on January 12, 2019

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  • From saxman66 on January 11, 2019

    Well a fair number of events there. Given that George said all his family were social climbing monsters except for two brothers, and that another had died is he including his parents as well as Ron and Ginny? Sounds like there could be major Weasley family conflict developing. Also interesting that George seems to be such a good information source, both advicing Harry and then being suggested by Draco to Hermione.

     

    So Pansy and Lavender are working together as PI's. That sounds like an interesting combination.

     

    I wonder if that half-breed orphanage actually exists or whether all the children have had nasty accidents. Hope not but it could be the simplest solution for the people who don't want them around. :( It does seem to have given Hermione a purpose in life, which is a good think.

     

    I noticed that Draco referred to Hermione as love and she was quite happy with the term, although whether Harry noticed I don't know.

     

    There is of course one other simple way Harry could find clear evidence that Ginny was cheating on him, although it might not be accepted in the wizard world and its a way he would hate to find evidence. Getting a DNA check to confirm he's actually the father of his son.

     

    Some interesting threads coming together here. Along with that Height seems to be a real evil piece of work.


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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 09, 2019

    Just stumbled onto this story and I am enjoying it so far. I am sorry the Weasleys are so horrible. Sigh... I am glad Harry, at least, is somewhat better. Though, he only contacted her when he needed her and her support. I look forward to more and thank you. HG4eva


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  • From Sophisticated_raven on January 09, 2019

    I love this chapter!!!! I really enjoyed it when he got to the ministry and carried her out before his signature sneer. What an exit .... Oh, I swoon. I’m impatiently awaiting the next chapter. 


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